KR OS: Living on the edge -NOTE Pg 5 - Page 4

DO u know that i simply admire u n ur writings??

loved it.

Thisd was superb..

i m ur big fan yaar
u cn do anythng
u cn write anythng
n dat to wid such a perfection

loved it...loved it...lovedit
soo thrilling, romantic n awsome
phele toh thodi si title smjhne mai prblm hui bt after reading it half i was lyk no 1 cn write dis better dan you
u r best ammy di!!

Arre ye to maine socha hi nhi 😆

un becharon ne bhi kahan socha hoga ki sari galti chewing gum ki hai 🤣

tabhi to rey ke paas kuch nhi mila 😉

ooohhh... Ab samaj mei aaya mjhe... I totally forgot abt dat chewing gum wala part... Hehe... Yeah it was actually based on Dhoom2 ... Bt ptani kyu bunti n babli came in my mind... Jo bhi tha... Mjhe to maza aaya padne mei... ;)

Thanks for clarifying :D 

Originally posted by: a_happy_2000

Well Well Well ...

Just explaining how the robbery was done ...

Rey disguised as the middle aged man ,..

He took the ring and put bethe chewing gum to it and stuck it beneath the table

Kria disguised as the blonde .. came to get it ...by distracting the manager ..

Yes  .. it was more on Dhoom 2 lines  ..not bunty bubli ...

@Yogini .. I wanted to write how they met etc.. but it was OS .. so couldn't stretch .. already  main story bahut kheechti hun ...

:-)

Hope you all enjoyed it ...

Regards,

Amy

oops i was wrong...😆
kk now i got it...

amazing os .
very good concept.
thnx fpr pm.

Lovely.. I hv already read d same story in my english buk..
Stil i lvd d part..

Awesome os!!