Ariya SS: Tere pyaar mein.. Fanaa..(Epilogue)16/11 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
 πŸ˜­ Riya is gone.. πŸ˜’ No, ...

The update was very emotional and painfullπŸ˜”, i had tears while i read it.. How can Riya do this how can she leave like that...😭

U wrote it really well, πŸ‘ ,.. i have always said u r a fabulous writter...!!!

Update soon!! waiting for the prologue..😊
Love,
DeepπŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww..:) such a lovely update.. it was just amazing... it made me cry..:) waiting for the prologue.. update soon...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
NO PROLOUGE CAN BE GUD WHEN RIYA IS NOT THERE!!! NO HUMSHAKAL!!! MUJHE TO SIRF RIYA HI CHAHIYE!!!! PLZZ DO SOMETHING NA!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I can't say it didn't make me cry, I fully expected Arjun to save Riya, but I guess there was no other way.

Loved the update, and I am looking forward to the happy end.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwrr Not Evn Once I Stopped Crying Throughout Especially When Arjun Waa Begging Riya To Stay my Heart Sank And When He Goes He Will Do Anything Kept On Begging Her I Was Jus Pouring Down Wiv Tears... Truly Touched My Heart
No Words Riya's Promises That She Asked Arjun To Make Where Jus To Emotional
Amazing And Awesome No Words
Truly left me Speechless That I Dont Even Remember Wht To Write
Loved It Sad Riya Died But It Was Meant To Happen
Thanksz Do PM Me Wen U Update The Prologue x
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow πŸ˜­... riya is gone??? πŸ˜­ hope she is saved somehow... please update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely one actually awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
riya left them forever:-(
that's too bad...hope arjun will control himself nd handle his cute daughter. though riya died,
it was a superb update di...
Waiting for a happy ending as always.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously you're such an awesome writer Avantika!

I mean you've made us all cry, you've described their emotions really beautifully!

The brave Lavanya whose only weakness was riya! A super woman!

Loved her to bits and the softer side of Arjun!

Ariya, the doll! She would be really proud of her Mamma!
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Posted: 11 years ago
adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhurithi adhoore HUM!!!!


this is the first thing that came to my mind after reading this chap...😭 
zakham phir se taza ho gaya avantika...this was the exact way i felt when they brutally killed my RIYA in the show..😭
nicely written n beautifully conveyed...ariya's dilemma...arjun not wanting to let riya go, riya trying her best to make arjun hate her...
but LOVE is beyond all this...they can see through each other's soul ...so any misunderstanding can't be there for s long...arjun finally gave in n riya...that blast...i don't know what to say...will just silently wait for ur prologue...😳