Journey of Love part 10 on pg 17 Discontinued - Page 2

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sushmakryan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice update continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Lovely update😊
Viren is sooo cute...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Ok guys another update for u today as I won't be updating it till Sunday so here it goes πŸ˜Š

Part 2

Viren turned around and was about to leave Jeevika holds his hand.

Jeevika: I'm sorry. Mera sach mein wo matlab nahi ta mein to bass yu hi tora daar gayi thi app ko yaha achanak dekh ke.

Viren turns around to face Jeevika.

Viren: Daar gayi thi kiun mein koi bhoot hu kia?

Jeevika: Mein aissa kab kaha mein to bass wo

Before Jeevika could complete her sentence Viren wrapped her in his arms and says.

Viren: Arrey yar itna gabrah kiun rahi ho mein to bas mazak kar raha tha. Mein tum se bhala naraz hosakta hu kia?

Jeevika blushed and  look down.

Viren lift her face and start approaching her lips but when they were inches apart there was a knock on the door. It was Sneha and Sarad.

Sneha: Di darwaza kholo.

Jeevika: Virenji Sneha! app jaiye 

Viren: Aise kaise jaou tum se thek se bat bhi nahi hoi

Sneha: Di app andar ho na?

Jeevika: Haan Sneha aai.

Sarad: Sali ji kia hua app darwaza kiun nahi khol rahi?

Jeevika: Kuch nahi Sarad bass ek minuite.

Jeevika to Viren: App jaiye

Viren: Acha jata hu par ek shart per.

Jeevika: Kia?

Viren pointed towards his cheek

Jeevika blushed and said abhi nahi.

Viren: Ok then I m not going.

Jeevika:thek hai.

She kissed him on his cheek and said now go

Viren: Kia baat hai. Iss bar to bohat jaldi de di phelye to kitni request karni parti aur ajj.

Jeevika: Virenji please jayee

Viren: Ok baba ja raha hu bye

Jeevika: Bye

As Viren went out Jeevika opened the door 

Sneha: Kia hua Di darwaza kolne mein itni der?

Jeevika: Nahi wo mein actually changa kar rahi thi. Btw tum log yaha?

Sneha: Haan wo actually mom app ko niche bula rahi hai.

Jeevika: Ok lets go.


Thats it for now. Hope you like it.

Do comment and like πŸ˜Š

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Thank You πŸ˜Š

sushmakryan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nice update continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice story continue soon n pm mee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
both the parts were awesome... looking forward to ur next update...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
absolutely superb loving it cannot wait for sunday
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hiii!
This was a vey nice update, thanks for the PM!
Will be waiting for Sunday for the next part... Do update soon!
Thanks..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
thanks for the pm...
it was really very nice!!!
plz do continue...can't wait:)))πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome
pm me nxt part plz