FF MERE RANG MEIN CHAP 7 UPDT PG 19 16/12/2012 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
guys this chapter is going to be a tribute to riya...i felt bad that in the show all the etf members have forgotten her...i am mad at the cv's as well so this chapter is dedicated to the wonderfull cop riya mukherjee

chapter 2(b)

Riya took deep breaths and what she spoke next left all of them
surprised and speechless

 riya looked at all of them one by one with some what accusing
eyes and they her eyes fell on the picture with a garland around it
then she understood that all of them thought that she was dead
so she asked whose body did you guys burn suspecting that it was
me when i am very much alive.

All of them looked flabbergasted it seemed that everybody had lost
their voice suddenly.shree and chotu  thought that they were
going to faint,first they were sad and remembering ri and their masti

then they were facing arjun sir's tantrums then all of a sudden riya
comes back...they thought that god had heard their pleas he had
returned their friend and she was back from the dead but now as riya
spoke they did not know what to make out of it.


they were replaying the scene again and again in their heads they were
pretty sure that she had taken her last breath in front of them..then what was
riya talking about.they were going to ask riya what is she talking about
but seeing the rage in her eyes they thought better to keep their mouths
shut and let their seniors take the lead and pacify her.

Arjun came out of his silent mode he looked at riya for a second and then
explained it to her that the doctor said that you had consumed the capsule
and that caused your body to deteriorate and it became impossible to
recognize you in that state.

As Riya heard this explanation something snapped within her she felt rage
course through her body,her blood boiling she asked arjun or rather accused
him saying you claim to be a supercop toh aap ko yeh ajeeb nahi laga ki kissi
ki body iss kadar kaise sadd sakti hai ki uska chehra bhi pehchaana na jaa sake
.in this case when we discovered that dr wadwa(sorry dont remember the name)
consumed the capsule containing the bacteria his body took atleast a week to detoriorate
so how did you guys buy what the doctor said.for the first time in his life arjun
felt like a fool...he did not know how to answer her this question.

shree seeing her angry tried to calm her down by saying that they were way too
depressed  and they thought she took her last breath in front of them so thats why
they did not feel that anything was odd or out of place.

shree's explanation angered her further.she went into thinking mode,when she first
heard the doctors conversation,she was confused as to know that she had been in
coma for nearly three weeks and she was being experimented on for god knows
what and nobody not even her best friends had a clue about anything.

she thought hadn't they tried to find her.she had full faith on her team that if they
knew that she was missing they would go to any extend to find her.from her
experience in the team she had known that it takes them maximum only five days
to solve a case and here it had been 3 weeks and no one was able to find her.

her faith was more on Arjun that he out of all people would have found her and
rescued her by now.isn't that what made her admire him,his capabilities,his
analytical skills,his no nonsense attitude.but even he failed in knowing her
wearabouts
this had shocked her.

during the entire ride in the taxi all these thoughts were revolving in her mind
she felt extreamly sad and heartbroken thinking that no one cared enough about
her to rescue her.now she knew that why nobody searched for her cause they
thought she was dead.

shree called out her name but she did not respond,he yelled riya,she came out of her
trance she looked at all of them again and when her eyes turned to arjun she scoffed and said that the brilliant etf officers were so depressed that they believed the doctor and
his lies that they were so upset they burned someone else's body thinking it was her
and they let those filthy doctors perform experiments on her.her this statement
shocked everyone to the core.

Arjun came out from the shock and now was seething in anger.he imagined the
doctors performing experiments on her.he felt like putting as many bullets he has
in his gun through that doctors body.without a word he takes his gun and leaves from
there.

Everybody knew where he was going and what was going on in his mind.for the
first time rathod did not want to stop him.none of them wanted to stop him everybody
felt their blood boiling thinking what riya had to go through.

riya seemed to mellow down a bit she knew where he had gone she immediately told
rathod sir to go after him and stop him.there were more patients like her and they would
have to get solid proof to catch this renouned doctor cause he had many connections
.they had to corner him so he could not escape on a technicality.she out of all people
wanted to see him behind bars for the rest of his life.

Rathod hearing this seemed to get his old streak back and took charge.he asked shree
to stay with riya and asked chotu to come with him to stop raute .he just hoped he wasn't too late to stop arjun.

to be continued...

hey guys please tell me how was this chapter.was it up to the mark..your feed back is very valuable to me.again thankyou all for all your support.

Edited by pbhattacharya - 11 years ago
shrutisweety thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
aww yaar awsome update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
amazing yaar
dying to read more plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
nice update...thanks for the pm..waiting the romance of ariya again and masti of trio...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing update ...
I loved it awww poor riya she had to go through so much ... Wish the same thing would happen and she comes back ...I just love riya ...n love ur update 2... 
Omg Arjun is just boiling ...I wonder what is he gonna do with that doctor ...
Plz update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice update... continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: prava55663

nice update...thanks for the pm..waiting the romance of ariya again and masti of trio...



very soon but have to get this case solved first...next chapter new characters will be introduced.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
very interesting
So Riya is back, and they have a new case now, to prove that doctor's lies and stop him from destroying other people's lives
Nice way to make Riya alive😊
Please continue😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow   i  like  it !!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼  plz  pm   when  u  update  plz  plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: haruhi26

very interesting

So Riya is back, and they have a new case now, to prove that doctor's lies and stop him from destroying other people's lives
Nice way to make Riya alive😊
Please continue😊


this concept was there in the back of my head since the cv's killed riya's character
i was really sad that they did not remember riya in the last two epi's so i thought a lot
about it before penning it down...this is the first time i am atempting to write or else
i was happy being a reader...but after what the cv's showed  i could not help it.
i hope i do justice to this work...and thanks for liking my work...means a lot.