FF MERE RANG MEIN CHAP 7 UPDT PG 19 16/12/2012

hey guys for the first time i am gathering all my courage and attempting to write something on my fav jodi ariya...this story is based on love and friendship...hope you guys like it.all the characters will be the same but this story will be focused mainly on riya...two new characters will be introduced
dr ridhima gupta
and angellla montenegro


MERE RANG MEIN
chapter 1(a)

LOCATION:   CITY HOSPITAL


Doctor:the patient is still in coma...its good for us we can use her as a lab rat and do all sorts of experiments on her...she is still weak so even if she regains her conciousness she wont be able to do anything...sister keep an eye on her and tell your fellow mates to keep an eye on other patients as well.
girl in coma:she regains her counciousness back and heard everything that the doctor said,but pretends to still be in coma so she can escape from here.as the doctor goes away she looks around to see if there is any back door to this chamber...luckily at that time she saw a pune entering from somewhere back..she stayed still for about an hour so that she does not capture anyone's attention.as the nurse starts to fall a sleep she slowly removes the needle and iv bag..tiptoes around the room she comes in contact with a tranculizer injection which was kept near the slab she picks it up and injects the nurse she drags her to the corner and makes her wear her clothes and she changes into the nurse outfit so that even if somebody sees her wont suspect her.she was breathing heavily cause she was still very weak...but she swore not to give up...she escaped from the back door of the chamber and bumped in to the doctor...she quickly hid her face so he wont be able to see her and said that she was going to the washroom and walks away...the doctor does not suspect anything as he had and important meeting with his fellow doctors who were the part of his research.she runs as quickly as she can and prays to god to give her strength to reach her destination.she goes out of the hospital and hails a cab...
cab driver:kaha jaana hai memsaab
girl:ETF HEAD OFFICE (BANDRA)
to be continued

please tell me how is it...if i should continue or not...if you liked it please press the like button...give me your suggestions the next part will be updated soon.tc
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INDEX

chap 1(a)=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862

chap 1(b)=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&TPN=2

chap 2(a)=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&TPN=5

chap 2 (b)= http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&PID=68842789&#68842789

chap 3(a)=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&TPN=9

chap 3(b)=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&PID=69326735&#69326735

chap 4=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&TPN=12

chap 5:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&PID=70857674&#70857674

chap 6:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&PID=70976065&#70976065

chap 7:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271862&TPN=19
Edited by shona16 - 11 years ago

wow it is interesting

wow!!!! plz continue it👏... i hope the girl is riya!!! kash aisa kuch show mein bhi ho jaatha!!! 😭

Dr ridhima gupta grabbed my attention first (i m a biggg AR Fan)..

Fantastic start ...

sorry... double post
Edited by Queen.Bee - 11 years ago

intresting chapter... update soon...

wow intersting continue soon
send me pm

hey guys thanks for the support...really appreciate it...will be updating the next part tonight...

precap:chap 1 (b)
rathod is about to yell at arjun and ask him whats wrong with him lately
but before he could he heard a loud banging on the door.

CHARACTER SKETCH
ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE :tough no nonsense cop with great analitical skills...tough on the outside soft on the inside...pretty much the same as the show has potrayed his character

RIYA MUKHERJEE :research specialist,an emotional cop with a passion to clean the society and help as much as she can to put criminals behind bars...her parents vanished when she was 15...she does not know if they are alive or not...has an elder brother named ritvik who abandoned her after her parents dissapeared.

SAMEER RATHOD: same as he is in the show...his love interest would be introduced in the future.

SHREEKANT SEN:same as the show

CHOTU:same as the show...but married to the 11:30 girl in the suppermarket named saloni

ANGELLA MONTENEGRO(MICHAELA CONLIN):riya's best friend the only one who knows riya in and out.

RIDHIMA GUPTA(SUKRITI KANDPAL):also riya's friend...her role in the story will be potrayed in the latter chapters.

RITVIK MUKHERJEE(KARAN VEER BORA):riya's elder brother...totally opp riya...when riya abides by the book he believes in breaking the rules...not a negetive character...just a lousy brother who loves his sister and has a reason for abandoning her...that will be revealed in latter chapters.
Edited by pbhattacharya - 11 years ago

Great start and a very interesting concept. I'm very intrigued to see what happens next and whether the girl is Riya or not.