Part PART 16…….(Understanding and Maturity)……
This part is for all the spl persons in my life….
Special thanks to all my readers……and thanks….4 urs lovely …superb…comments…...kya words use karu apko thanks karne ke liye…..yeh samaj ni aa raha…h...itne ache ache comments dete h aap sab……thanks from the core of my heart……for encouranging me to write further,…and sorry also for being late…I know aap bahut wait karte h …but I m not a regular writer so…need time to write….
Part 16……(Understanding and maturity…)
Ram read her wish ……and started thinking….
Flash backs….
Priya after giving bath to sam….called ram ..said….in serious tone…ram….
Ram…han bolo jaan…kya hua…tum etni serious kyun lag rahi ho?
Priya….ram main shadi karne se phele aapse aur puri family se ek bar milana chahti hu…kuch jaruri baat karni h…..
Ram…..kya hua priya….batao toh…?
Priya ….vo baat sabke samne hi hogi…es liye aap sab 1 ghante me ghar aa jao…plz…
Ram…..acha thik h main sab se ja kar baat karta hu aaur hum aate h….
Priya…I will wait 4 u all….
Then…priya called kk…..kk…picked the call…..haan beta kaisi ho tum?
Priya….namaste maa….main thik hu….aap kaisi h?
kk….found priya her voice something serious…..asked ..beta kya hua….tum etni serious kyun ho?
priya….maa muje apse aur sab ghar walo se kuch baat karni h…shadi se pehele…so...es liye maine ram se kaha h…ki aap sab ghar aa jao….
kk….beta hua kya..bolo toh sahi….
Priya….maa aap a jaye na….fir baat batati hu….aur maa sab aana….dadi…papa….rishab…nuts…sab…plz…its my request….bcz we r family na toh main chahti hu sab ho…tabi main apse baat karu…
kk…thik h beta jaisa tum chahti ho vasa hi hoga….hum aate h….
priya….thik h maa main rakhti hu….bye,,,
kk….bye beta….
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Priya also called vik and neha….asked them to come here….
All family members got ready to go….
Sharma House……
Priya goes to shipra's room….and talked to sudhir…said…papa thodi der me sab aayenge…muje fir sab se baat karni h….
Sudhir….thik h beta ..hum tyar h…aa jane de sabko….
Priya said…maa muje apse baat karni h….suno na….
Sipra….was angry a little from her after her morning behavior….
Priya…said…maa suno na…vo thodi late ho gyi thi..es liye ese keh diya…went near her….and hugged her…said…acha ab baat bi ni karoge apni beti se…2 din baad hamesha ke liye vida ho jaungi….fir kya karoge mere bina??
Shipra….said…pta h….lekin eska matlab yeh toh ni ki tu muje mere natin se milne na de….
Priya…acha toh yeh baat h…..ab samaji…mere se nahi…apne natin se na milne ka gussa h….and laughs….shipra….also laughs….aur nit oh kya….tuje ab main kaha puchne wali hu….ab toh sirf main mere natin jada imp h…tuje jitna pyar karna tha……na maine kar liya…ab mere natin ki bari h…samji….ja lekar aa use….
Priya….samaj gyi….lati hu….ab aap hi rakhna use puri shadi me….
Shipra….main hi rakhungi….tu chinta mat kar,….3 bacho ki maa hu,,..samji na..
Priya….maa aap bi na kaisi batin karte ho…lati hu….
Priya bought sam from her room and hands over to shipra…
Shipra….are mera raja beta aa gya….mere bte ne kuch piya ya ni??...muma ne diya kuch mere bache ko??
Priya…said…ha maa dud pi liya h….suno aap ese sambhalo main saman pack kardu tab tak jo jo lekar jana h….
Shipra…..ha thik h ja….aur jo set maine tuje diye the vo sab rakh lena…
Priya…ji maa…..
Priya comes to her room…starts her packing of rest of the things…..she packed her suits….and sarees with all jewellery….and her books…her medals and trophies….etc….
Bell Rang….
Sudhir said….beta lagta h sab aa gye….
Priya…aai papa….aap chalo….
Whole kapoors with vik and neha came….all were confused ….wht's the matter….
Ram and nuts….took blessing from sudhir and shipra…..ram tooks sam from her….said….are mera beta toh papa se mila hi nahi kal se….
All wished each other….priya and karthik….came out and took blessind from dadi…papa and maa….
All were looking priya….and ram asked…bolo priya kya baat h …kyun etni tense ho…??
Priya….aap sab relax ho jaiye fir batati hu….
All sat….priya said ram …maine apse yeh baat karne ke liye sabko bulaya h…muje sam ko lekar kuch baat karni thi,….
Amar….said….beta bolo na kya baat h?
Priya…papa main ram se simple se tarah se shadi karna chahti hu…I know ram bahut bade business man h toh vo sab business delegates ko bulana chahte hoge….lekin… es waqt hamari situation thodi alag h….jaise humne sam ko adopt kiya h…toh main ni chahti ki har kisi ko bta chale ki sameer ko hamne kaha se adopt kiya h,…jaise aap sab jante h ki sam ki maa bi ek bachi h….aur main ni chahti us bachi par koi ungli uthaye….aur na hi chahti hu ki sam ko kabhi future pta chale ki sam ki real mom ke sath kya hua….aap jante h na press walo ko…sab ek baat ki 2 baten banate h…aur es baat ka affect finally sam par padega….aur sab hamari family ke bare aur ram ke bare me ulta sidha likhe yeh main ni chahti….aur ek baat aap jaise bi chahe nuts ki shadi kar sakte h….usme main apke sath hue s decision me….
Ram saw her with lots of love…and thought ..priya ….tumse acha muje koi ni mil sakta….
Dadi said…..kitni samjar h meri bahu….she blessed priya….said…jiti h putar,….
All were impressed by her maturity ….and amar said…beta main bahut khush hu ki mere ghar me etni achi beti aa rahi h….muje acha laga jankar ki aap ne etni dur ki batin sochi abse hi,…beta vase ek baat h muje khusi h ki ram aur tumhari soch bahut milti h…..kyun Krishna ji…
kk….hanji ….ram bi yehi chahta tha….aur usne hame yeh pehle hi keh diya tha…
Priya was happy to listened to all these…looked ram with lots of love…thinks…ram aapse acha muje aur koi ni mil sakta tha…
Bg music….both were having the perfect eye lock….
(Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Maine Socha Na Tha )
Vik slowly said toh neha…dekho laila majnu kaise kho gye??...vik cougs then…puts his hand on ram…said…bas kar majnu….all listens to it…all laughs….ram gets embrassed….and priya also….priya said main kuch khane ko magwati hu….aur vase bi aaj sab ka lunch yehi h …yaad h na papa ne kal kaha tha…..
Ram said….priya tumne na mere surprise kharab kar diya,..
Priya…matlab….
Ram….jaha tak main bi wahi chahta hu jo tum….
Priya….means…..
Ram….means …ki tum shadi vahi karna chahti hona jaha humne phere liye the???
Priya looked him….with surprisingly…said in full excitement….apko kaise pata???
Ram….dekha maa maine kaha ha na….yeh bi vahi chahti h….es liye maine us din…sare arrangements vahi kar va diye the….
Priya….means …maa ko bi pta h….?
kk…han beta…ram muje us jagah par lekar gya tha…jaha tum dono ne phere liye the…..yeh surpise rakha tha apke liye beta…lekin aab toh tumhe sab pta chal gya hi h….wahi sare arrangements kiye h….shadi vahi hogi…
dadi said to ram…oye ram putar bahut pyar kar liya tune mere pote ko…chal aab muje de ese….
Ram gives sam to dadi….
Dadi said to kk….dekho Krishna es ke aane se kaise 2 families 1 ho gyi…sab kitne khush h na…
kk…ha biji….hum bahut lucky h ki es ne ram aur priya ko milva diya….
nuts and karthik said….humne bi kuch decide kiya h….
nuts said….agar bhabi aur bhai etne simlpitcy se shadi se karna chahte h toh hum bi….hum bi unki tarah ese hi pyar ke bhandan me bandana chahte h jis se hamara relation bi hamesha bana rahe,……aur usi mandap me hum bi shadi karnege….
Ram and priya both hugged nuts and karthiiik...both took blessings….as they were taking the blessing from their elders….a screame came from behind………."diii"……….all looked back….she was none other than Ayesha…..priya screamed………..ayeshaaa………….with a broad smile……..and Ayesha came running towards her and both hugged each other….all were looking them with lots of happiness…..priya took her face in her palms asked her….meri chodi si gudiya kaisi h???...meri pari….ayesha….said…..main bahut khush hu diii….i missed u lot….priya…..i also missed u lot meri pari…..ayesha.. hugged her again…small tears of happiness came in their eyes…..they were meeting after 5yrs…..priya wiped her tears….aaj ni rona….samji na….she also wiped priya's tears…..aaj meri di ki aakhon me aasu ni……
Shipra said…..are tum behono ka pyar pura ho gya ho toh hame bhi koi puch lo…..priya said….maa humara pyar kabi pura ni hoga….kyun Ayesha….she said….ha di…
Ayesha went to her maa….hugged her….then she heard a cry….of a baby….she was shocked to see….sam….then priya …said…are mera beta rone lag gya….priya moved forward and took….sam from dadi….and said…are mera beta kyun rone laga…..she touched…his pant….was wet…..ayesha asked di yeh apka..beta matlab???...muje kuch samaj ni ho raha kya ho raha h….??? she took him to the room…..
Ram said….Sali ji….thodi der sabar ki jiye…fir sab pta chal jayega apko….she smiled in brief…..but was not able to understand what was happening ….there….
Ayesha went to meet….suddhir…she hugged…..sudhir introduced her to amar ji…..she wished him and kk…..and kk hugged….she went to meet dadi…dadi blessed her…..she meet nuts….they were gud friends….who didn't met from many years….both hugged….and then karthik…..she said….hii….bhai…kaise ho aap?...and hugged him….he said….main thik hu….tu suna kaisi h??
Ayesha…main thik hu bhai…..congrates to both of u…..
Nuts and karthik hugges her again….says thank u so much…..
Then rishab was standing there…..smiling briefly…..ayesha looked him from the corner of her eyes….both had a soft corner for each other ……long time ago….4yrs back…both felt something for each….and waited for each other ….for proper time to come…..
Ayesha moved forward and said….hii…
Rishab…kaise ho aap??
Ayesha….main thik hu…or aap….
Rishab…… main bi thik..and smiled ….
Just shaked hands with each other as all were there…..ayesha moved towards….ram…
Ram…kaisi h meri saali ji????/
Ayesha…..main thik hu jiju…..aap kaise h???
Ram….tumhari di mere sath h jabse tab se bahut acha hu….and smiled….
Ram hugged her briefly…..and said…bahut saal baad mil rahe h hum…kyun Ayesha….
Ayesha…hanji jiju…tab hum sirf bhai ki vajah se mile the vo bhi officially….
Ram….lekin ab toh apke sath special rista ban gya h….kyun ?
Ayesha…..ab toh main apko tang bi kar sakti hu…ek hi saali jo h jiju apki…..
Ram ..laughs…han sure jitna tang karna h kar lena….
Ayesha meet vik and neha also….neha hugged her….and was happy seeing them as family…
Ram said….ab aap betho aur sari baat suno ki vo bacha kaun h….aur kaise aaya yaha…..
Ram holds her hand made her sit….and tells everything in brief….and explains ……she was happy to see the love chemistry of her di and jiju…and said….i m very happy jiju….ki aap meri di ki life me aaye ho….and hugged her once again….ram said…meri har khushi ki vajah sirf tumhari di…ha…I m happy to have her my life partner…aab jao aur apne pyare se betije (means ….son of sister) se milo……
Priya comes out…with sam…..she said….dyan se ase utha….ayesha took sam as her di was telling…..she said….di yeh toh bahut chota sa h….so swt di….yeh dekho…has bi raha h…she was very excited….she said….apko pta h main chote hote bi kitna darti thi kisi ka baby uthane me….lekin aap kabi ni darti thi,….aap hamesha uta lete the….and all laughs….rishab was happy seeing her….he was continulsy looking her…Ayesha was watching his eyes…..was noticing his curiousness……
Ayesha …kisses sam's his forhead…
Vik said….chalo yr ram aab puri family aaj complete h so lets have some photos na….all said…ha kyun nahi….
Rishab….said….bhai…main leta hu..pics…..ayesha felt something…and said…vik bhai aap lejiye na…..rishab took out his cell….took her photos with….sam…..then ram hugged him…whn ram hugged her….priya fel like jealous…..she thought….how can she can't even see Ayesha near him….she closed her eyes….and control her feelings….try not to react…then Ayesha said…di esse pakdo na…muje thoda dar lag raha….all laughed…then all took photos …will full family…..priya 's pic with Ayesha..nuts…kk…shipra..dadi….ram's pics with everybody….
Sudhir..said…aaye ..samdhiji….khana tyar h….chale….all went to the back baranda of the house…its was beautifully decorated with plants…and flowers….proper lunch was arranged for all…..a big round table for all….all food was served in b/w….
Ayehsa said di aap sab chalo main fresh hoke aati hu….all were busy with each other…
Rishab listened her…..and silently excused himself from there….went slowly behind Ayesha….
Ayesha was in bedroom…a room used many years before….which were having pics of her …bro and di…some pics of her maa and papa…some of full family pics….….he came inside the room slowly…without making noise….and closed the door…and saw all the pics….
Ayehsha was looking for clothes in changing room…..he went back….and huged her from back…..ayehsa smiled…hanji….aa gye aap…kaise ho?...he was resting his head on her shoulders…..he smiled…..aap bikul ni badli….ayesha said…aap bi toh nahi….missed u sooo much….yaad h na vo ek din …jo hamne ek sath spent kiya tha….rishab kaise bhul sakta hu…us din ki yaad ne muje tumhare liye wait karna sikhaya diya…ab dekho….missed u 2….turned her…..placed her soft kiss on her forhead…..both smiled……and ayesha hugged him again back….and said…and their was sudden knock on the door….priya was knocking ayehsa…jaldi aa ..kitni der lageygi….
Ayesha said….di….jaldi chupo….ni toh di muje chodengi ni….
Rishab …kaha…..ha aur bhai muje ni….
Ayehsa….bed ke niche…rishab got under the bed….ayesha controlled her emotions…..and went out….and opened the door…said…han di..kya hua…vo main changing room me thi,…..
Priya….lekin change toh abi tak ni kiya….kya Ayesha…kitni der lagati h….jaldi aa ja….
Aur tu etni ghabrai hui kyun lag rahi h???
Ayehsa ….ni di esa kuch ni h….vo bas jaldi me aai na…es liye shayad,….
ram came behind….are Ayesha...meri dear saali ji….….tum kitna waqt logi…sab tumhe yaad kar rahe h bahar…priya was getting ultimate jealously….and thought ….kya h jab se ayehsa aai h …mere se toh ek baar bi baat ni ki…bas usi par dyan h…had h..biwi pass me h…saali ki padi h enhe bi….and again controlled her feelings…said…jaldi aa na…ayesha…
Ram said….priya tumne rishab ko dekha…thodi der phele toh bahar hi tha….
Ayesha felt now nervous…and said…aaj hum gaye…mummered in her mouth….and ram said ..phone karta hu,,,yeh ladka bi na pta ni kaha chal jata….
Rishab was lisening …and immedialty puts his cell on silent….and priya said jaldi aa…ayeshya…said ha di aap chalo main change karke aati hu….and immediately closes the room….then asks rishab to come out,…..and rishab said,,,aaj hum gye,….ram called rishab…rishab's phone was vibrating in his hands…..both were nervous…..ayesha said uthana mat…jiju bahar hi h…saamaj jayenge….tum ruko…main change karke aati hu….tab tak…ni aur der ho jayegi….
Both came out…ram asked papa apne rishab ko dekha…he said…yehi hoga…dekh lena…tu yaha aa…hamare pass beth….all were sitting around the round table…kk….said…priya beta phele tum khalo…sam ko muje de do…..priya…ni maa aap shuru kijiye…koi baat ni….main baad me kahti hu….aap shuru toh ki jiye...
Ayesha….came out and opened the door….and asked rishab koi ni h…jaldi se jao…rishab came out….and leaves her room…..and she also comes out….rishab came after wards….both were nervous…..but smiled….ram asked kaha tha??..risbah….kab se dhund raha hu….
Rishab ….bhai vo ek phone aa gya that toh bahar tha……ram….aaja jaldi yaha…made him sit there……
Ayesha sits besides priya…..di ese muje do na…aap khana kha lo…priya…ache se pad legi na…daregi toh ni….ayehsa…ni di…ab ni….ab sara dar chala gya….
Priya….achi baat h….le pakad…..ayesha holds him…with lots of love….and toughes her nose with him….and was felling new…..she said….sam main apki pyari si masi hu….rishab said in his heart….jaldi se chichi bi banogi…..and smiles….
Ayesha was first time touched his small hands….sam tights his grip around her fingers…..ayesha said…..dekho di…kitne pyar se meri ungli pad raha h….he is sooo cute di….ram said..kam toh meri saali bi nahi h….priya was feeling more jealous…..ram saw her love feeling jealous……priya closed her eyes….and .ram was enjoying her jealous feeling from the core of heart….he thought to make her more jealous….he again said….priya …priya ..hanji….ram said….ayesha shuru se esi h?...
Priya…matlab…
Ram….asi sweet and nutkhat si???
Priya doesn't want to answer him but,…she didn't wanted to create a scene there….she said….hanji….meri pari shuru se asi h…her voice was not more soft….ram could feel her jealsos tone in her voice…and gave ram a sherni look….ram smiled him back….in teasing smile…..all others were busy with themselves….rishab and ayesha were seeing each other ..from the corner of eyes….and smiling each other…but somewhere ram looked rishab….and thought something….and msged…priya….
Ram….hiii
Priya….muje apse baat ni karni….
Ram….are suno toh….
Priya…nahi sunna…muje kuch bi….:(
Ram….jaan….
Priya…kya h???
Ram…..are meri jaan etna gussa?
Priya…ha h….toh kya karu….
Ram ….baat bi ni karoge….
Priya…ni karungi….
Ram….are suno toh …etna gussa sehat ke liye acha ni hota jaan….
Priya…..main khud dr hu samjne na..muje mat samjao…
Ram……acha sorry na….
Priya…..ni ni jao jao…aur tariff karo ….
Ram…..acha baba sorry na meri baat toh suno
Priya…hanji bolo…
Ram…..muje lagta h rishab aur ayesha ke bich kuch chal raha h?...
Priya….kaisi batine kar rahe h ram…..
Ram….are yr kab se dekh raha hu….rishab meri baton se jada ayesha par dyan de raha h….
Priya…..are abhi toh dono mile h…ese hi kuch bi sochte h aap?
Ram…are nahi yr….kuch gadbad jarur h …
Priya….muje ni lagta….
Ram …..acha suno muje kuch chaiye!!!...
Priya…..kya??
Ram….samja karo na…
Priya….ni abhi nahi…kal raat ko aane wale 3 din ka sara kota pura kar diya tha…samje na…nothing ….
Ram…are had h ….
Priya….es me had kya h??
Ram….had toh h na….ki tum muje ek huggy bi dene ko tyar ni ho…just a single….
Priya….aacha baba de dungi..yaha se free hone do….fir dekhenge …
Ram…..pakka na…
Priya…..hanji pakka….
Then all finished with their lunch and with lots of chit chat….ram said…priya vo tum kuch dikhane ki baat kar rahi thin a..chale…with a mischief smile on his face….priya was shocked…..and could not belive how could he be so eagar 4 a hug….can say….all this in b/w all….
Priya said…hanji……aap chaliye…main aati hu…..
Priya excused herself….ram as inside her room….ram hold her arm and with 1 shot she was 'inside the room….ram closed the door….before priya could say anything….ram was kissing her …….priya lost her senses…..ram was making sensations on her back…..priya with closing eyes…was lost in his kiss…and after some time….ram left her….bites her lower lip….and sucks its…also….priya….opened her eyes….yeh kyat ha ram….sab ke samne aap….
Ram…..yeh subah wali baat bhul gyi..yeh uske liye thi,….
Priya….acha vo….main toh kab ki bhul gyi thi,…
Ram …bahut uchal rahi thi na phone par…vase aaj bahut hot lag rahi ho….
Priya….sharam ki jiye…abhi shadi bi ni hui h….aur esi batin kar rahe ho….chalo bahar sab kya sochenge….
Ram….aur meri hug…
Priya….ab vo bi baki h???
Both were looking into each others eyes……ram…..moved closed to her ear…..she could feel…his breaths on her ear…..he slowly bites her ear lobe….love u….more than u love me…..
Priya closed her eyes….and could feel the purity and intense meaning of each word….
Priya…..moved forward….places a soft kiss on his lips…and says…love u more than anything…in this world……puts her arms around her neck…..and both joins there foreheads which each other….and priya …says….thanks ram 4 understading me…..ram says….thanks 4 u priya….tumne jo socha..sam ke liye vo muje acha lag…main bi es shadi ko simple se tarike se hi chahta tha…..sirf sam ki vajah se….smiles…..and lot in each other….in each others eyes….suddenly…they heard a cry……both comes out…of their thoughts….priya…dekha…sam bi rone lag gya….vo bi soch raha hoga ki uske mumaa papa romance me jada hi kho gye…aur use bhul gye….both laughs….ram slowly opens the door….and both goes out…
Ram comes out from his thoughts….
FLASH BACK ENDS….
Ram tooks….sam from her mother's side…and made him sleep on his own bed….….and covers her mom and sam with duvet….
Ram wents to see priya……
Goes in icu…sits on stool…takes her hand in his hand…..and feels her presence …..and says…priya….main jindagi me etna kabi ni dara jitna aaj dar gya tha…ek pal ke liye laga jaise mera sab kuch chala….aur main akela reh jauga fir se…tumhare bina...esa laga jaise tumhare aane se phele akela tha vase hi fir se tumhare bina reh jaunga….kyun etna dara diya muje….aaj muje ehaas hua ki main tumhare bina….main ni reh sakta….i m sorry priya…kal thoda gussa tha…tumhare se…es liye bol gya tha….muje maf kar do….and tears flowing from his eyes on her hand…..he kisses her hand gently…and puts its back….caress her hairs….and kisses her forhead…..with lots of love….
Comes to his room…and sits besides sam….cares his hairs and kisses him and rest besides him….and covers himself…….starts thinking….
FLASHBACK….
Priya gets the call from rajat….priya….takes the call in full excitement….says hi…..kaise ho rajat…ram sees her excitement….and thinks…yeh etna kyun uchal rahi h….?? dost hi toh h….
Rajat….hii…main thik hu….
Priya…..kab aaoge….yaha??
Rajat….are ghar ke bahar hi hu…yr,…gate toh kholo….
Priya….sachiii….in full excitement….
Rajat…haan sachi…kholo jaldi…
Priya….aai…..abhi…..ram was now getting jealous…seeing her excitement…
Priya went to open the door….and screams….hiii…..kaise ho?.
Both hugges …briefly…...aao andar…..(ram was feeling now more jealous…)
Rajat……main thik hu…congrates….
Priya…thank u sooo much……aoo….
Rajat came inside…..he took blessing from sudhir and shipra….
Priya…said…ao tumhe ram se milvau….
Ram was burning from inside….he just gave a fake smile…..priya introduced rajat with ram….ram shaked hand with him….
Rajat….said…so aap h meri best friend ke raj kumar….??
Ram …just said…haan….with fake smile…as priya was standing very close to him…..
Ram asked kya karte ho tum…..before ..rajat could ans …priya said…yeh mere sath dr h….hospital me….. …( priya thoughts….subah se muje jala rahe the na….ab dekhna….ab meri bari h…..)and smiles at him….
Ram was controlling her anger….didn't wanted to show to him……rajat asked…..karthik kaha h use bi milna h?...
Priya…said…ha aao na….chalo…she left with rajat…leaveing ram there…..ram went behind them and thought had h …rajat kea ate hi meri aur dekha bi ni…..
Priya made him introduces with whole kapoors….Rajat met everybody…..she didn't even looked back at ram…..
Ram was getting irritated now…
Flashback ends….
RAM says…priya tum bi na….kabhi ni sudhoregi…kitna sataya tha muje us din tumne…but love u my jaan….jaldi se thik ho jao …..bahut sari batin karni h tumse…..
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