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Posted: 11 years ago
wow Shrutiii... ⭐️

first of all a BIG HUG...  🤗 🤗 🤗
how are you dear... 😊

read 5 chaps now... n just stunned with the way the story is moving on... 😲 👏
at last our hero confessed his loveee... wowww... now we will get back the actual Arjun,,,   🥳
Riya is sooo cute n bubbly 😳 ...soo childish she is 🤪..loved it,,,,  😉

n yeah... how can I forget my Rathod ❤️ ... wowww...he is in lovee...  
haaayyyeee... he is sooo romantic... i am being jealous of Sandy...🤔 shez is sooo lucky..n got such a lovely surpise proposal from him... n that rain sequence was out of the world,,, 

n ya... knowingly or co-incidently... my name also came in the story... sooo happy I am now...🤪


loveeellyyy FF Shruti... 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏
Update as soon as possible dear... 😳
love u ... 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wait wait wait per kab tak plz update soon
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hey friends thanks for ur likes and comments
in few min i am updateing next part
sorry for the late
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hey frnds again i am sry for late,here is my next update 😊

👏Firstly i want to thank PURECURE(Neeli),to writting a beautiful poem to my ss,and that to romantic and proposal,so sweet of neeli,THANK U ONCE AGAIN NEELI DEAR for helping me 🤗

RECAP-


arjun and riya goes to first date to eat ice cream and long drive,rathore arranges a romantic dinner to sandhya and also proposes her

CHAPTER-17

Rathore and sandhya were dancing in rain romantically in each other arms,he bends down and sit on knee and says mai tumhe ek alag andas se propose karna chahata hoo,kya tum suno gi,she says yes😳

khuda ki iss baarish se...
teri is muskurahat se ...
hai mera ek purana rishta...
iss baarish ki har boond se...
yaad aati hai mujhe wo teri pehli nazar...
jisse chahta hoon mein dekhna ...
har gaddi har pal...
teri woh meethi meethi baatein...
tera woh gussa hoke bolna...
teri ankho se meri ankho ko taakna...
samet kar rakhan chahta hoon...
saari umar in lamhon ko...
apne dil ke paas har pal...
woh pehli baarish woh pehli teri nazar...
woh tera gussa phir woh teri muskaan...
jisne bikher diye meri zindagi mein nayein
rang...
in rangon ko humesha mujhe saath hai
rakhna...
inhi rango se banani hai ek nayi tasveer
humesha...
jisse lagne lage zindagi bhi tere sang ek
sundar sapna...
uss baarish se lekar iss baarish tak...
har boond ne mujhe tumhare hone ka
ehsaas jagaya...
aur yahii boonde hai saboot mere pyaar
ka...
ki tere bin ab jeena nahii hai dushwar ...
zindagi ke kisse pal ka...
hai mujhe yakeen,
ki chah hoga kabhi ya chahti ho mujhe
abhi...
toh kya vaada karti ho mere zindagi mein
wo suhane rang bikharne ka???
mere saath har aisi baarish mein...
mere haathon mein haath mere saath
chalne ka???
kya dogi tum mera saath humesha???

by saying this he forward his hand,she keeps her hand on his,he get up and hugs her,and rain stop😳

She breaks the hug and sees the sky,rathod watches her experation and says to her

Rathod- maine iss barish ko tumhare liye arrange kiya,ye natural barish nahi hai,ye artifical barish,jo aap ke hone vale pati ne arrange kiya hai😊

She starts blushing,and says ye sab aapne mare liye kiya hai,he says yes,and they both hug eachother😊

Meanwhile after long drive arjun and riya reaches riya's house,he park the suv and wake up her,riya utto tumhara ghar aagaya hai

Riya- sone do na arjun,kya problem hai aap ko,kuyn utta rahe ho😊

Arjun(smilngly)-riya kya mai abi tumhe mare ghar le chalu kya,shaadi nahi karni hai kya😆

By this sentence she wakes up from his shoulder and starts blushing.😳

They step out from suv and walk towards house,arjun watchs that house is locked and asks her for key,but riya says key to mare pas nahi hai,sayad sandhya bahar gayi hai,mai abi usko call karti hoo,she tries to call her but goes in vain,riya says to arjun uska phone to switched aaraha hai

Arjun says mai abhi rathod ko phone karta hoo,he takes his cell and call rathod

Meanwhile rathod and sandhya were enjoying their romantic movement,but suddenly rathod phone ring it was non other than arjun,he breaks the hug and answer the call

Rathod-(irritated)- kya hai arjun phone kuyn kiya jaldi batavo

Arjun -riya ka ghar locked hai

Rathod- to mai kay karu,kya ab mujhe aa kar lock kulna padega😆

Arjun- nahi keys sandhya ke pas hai,aur sandhya ka phone nahi lag raha,kya sandhya tumhare pas hai

Rathod- hai sandhya mare pas hai

Arjun -to aap log jaldi aajayiye,hum wait kar rahe hai

Rathod says yes and cuts the call and informs sandhya and they leave from their,with in 5 min they reach house,rathod park the suv and they both go inside the gate

Riya sees rathod and sandhya are coming and she watches both their dresses are wet,so she asks sandhya,

Riya- sandhya kaha gayi ti,aur ye tumhari saree kuyn wet hai,aur tum bi puri tarah se beg gayi ho,kya huva

Sandhya feels embarassed,and starts blushing and says vo mai ...mai vo,... barish mai...

Riya says barish to nahi aayiti na to kaise😆

Rathod also feels embarassed and says sandhya ,sandhya jaldi lock kholo

Sandhya opens the lock and they all go inside,arjun and rathod sit on sofa,while sandhya goes to change,riya goes to prepare coffee,riya brings coffee all,arjun rathod and sandhya drink their coffee,and they go from their

Rathod and arjun are in suv,arjun is driving and rathod is peeping out and smiling himself,arjun watchs this and asks him,kya baat hai rathod aaj bada vala smile de rahi ho.😆

Rathod- haa mai aaj sandhya ko propose kiya ta,vo bi haa bol chuki hai

They reach their house,arjun park the suv,they go to sleep

Here sandhya says to riya everything how rathod proposed and arranged rain and how he proposed through poem,and fell into sleep.

Next morning shree and chotu reaches first to office,they both are shocked😲 to hole office.

whole office is mess,all the files are on floor and one of the flower pot is also broken,all cabin r also mess,papers are on the floor

Shree call to arjun and says sir aap jaldi office aayiye

Rathod and arjun reaches office in 10 min,they are also shocked😲 to see whole office,

Rathod- who did this,how, and why

Arjun notices a paper on conferencn table,he take it and read it,in latter it was written only ETF with red pen 😕

Meanwhile riya also reaches and entries the office,and asks kya huva aur ye sab kya hai ,kisne kiya hai

Riya comes to conference table and takes diary,she opens it and read it

In DIARY
first page it was written that

APANI JAAN PAYARI HAI TO...
(ARRSSC)

Riya cals arjun and show it,arjun says ye diary kisne beja hai,aur iss diary ke alava sab kuch mess up hai,aisa kya hai is diary mai,isse padenge to jaan jayegi,ye kisne diya hoga etf ko gift😕

Fistly they all clean the office,and sit on conference table,and they sit together so that they all can read it,they open the second page of diary

In DIARY(second page)

Aadi
Rajiv
Ramya
Sahil
Shriya
Charan

Aadi and Ramya are husband and wife.
Rajiv and Shriya are getting married.
Sahil is brother of Ramya.and
Charan is brother of shriya
Aadi and Rajiv are own brothers
Ramya and Shriya are best friends
They all leave in one house

This all was written in second page of diary.

Arjun- ye log koun hai aur ye diary hume kuyn diya hai,ye etf se related kuyn hai😕

He says this and opens third page

In DIARY third page

It was fine morning shriya was preparing tea for all,rajiv come and hugs her from back and says tea bana rahi ho,she starts blushing and says chod rajiv koi aajaye ga,rajiv says aane do na,hum to hone vala pati patni hai,she notices that sugar is over,so she says rajiv chodo sugar katan ho gayi hai,mai abi lata hoo,he leaves her,and goes to freshen up

Shriya goes to bring sugar,she takes and while comeing she meet with minor accident,her left hand is bleading,she call rajiv and says abt accident,rajiv reaches their and take her to hospital,and after dressing he takes her to home.

THIRD PAGE END HERE

Arjun closes the diary,and he is thinking abt the incident,😕

Suddenly rathod phone rings and rathod pick up the call and shocked😕 wat he here in the phone

PRECAP

Rathod and arjun fight


Sorry in last part i said that rathod and arjun fight but not menstioned in this,in next part it wil be revelled,😊

SORRY FRIENDS I HAVE TO END THIS PART HERE ONLY,I WIL CONTINUE SOON😊

once again i want to thank NEELI(purecure)🤗  for writting a beautiful ppoem
Edited by shrutisweety - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipee me first although late 

nice chapter nahi ...very Nice Chapter

Ka confession tha rathore ka 

Arjun called at wrong tym 

OMG ..new case hain i guess 

yeh Diary ka chakkar ..waiting to know more 

U will continue after holidays na ...

Will b waiting 
Edited by tani23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the Diary part...
Loved the poem so much...so a special mention to Neeli..it was awesome

So soon Rathore and Arjun gonna fight...donno aage kya hoga..

waiting for next part
Edited by prava55663 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update di...
loved d poem...
sandhya sameer awesum!
ria house keys wid sandhya n rathod irritate wid d call of arjun..!!
diary 1st page scary..!!
case seems interesting..!!
waiting fr next..!!Edited by Payal_156 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update and lovely poem, loved reading every bit of it. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice poem! Romantic update!
loved the romantic rain...artificial rain..awww...i didnt know Rathod could be so romantic too

case is interesting...a little complex too...
cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely poem shru..and nice update as usual.