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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE STORY...I THINK UA STORY IS BETTER THAN WHAT CVS ARE SHOWING US...UPDATE SOON...THANX FOR PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why just two parts yaar??? Make this bigger!!!
Love the subtle way you expressed Khushi's sadness at the events around her.
Arnie...do you even know what your wife is going through?? Why are you even letting that creep Sheetal near you???
Why can't we have such mature and sensible scenes in the serial man??? Can you please become the CV of our show?? 
Thanks for the pm Zara!
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Posted: 11 years ago
well i was in a mood of angsty stuff and my friend complies..
what more can i ask??
perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww!!  You made me cry!!!  ðŸ˜­

Wonderful story.. Please please update soon..

Dying to read the rest of it!!

It was great!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too painful to read. My heart broke for Khushi.
Please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm
wish this was the way cvs had portrayed this entire track.
yes a wife will feel insecure but the lengths to which they show khushi go is disgusting. wish arnav cud see the pain his family's comments are causing khushi.😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Well,Zara!I am glad that you wrote an Angsty SS!cuz ATM that wil help me cleanse the frustration in my mind abt the present track.:/
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi is just being so nice... Me at her place wud be fuming with jealousy, but then its our Khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow first part was amazing, waiting for the last part, please do write the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
😆 that is why i have stopped following the show...i just read the FF's and the ss's lol atleast tht way the characters still live ðŸ˜ƒ...🤢 character assassination i wonder if Four Lions realise tht...nyways as usual loved ur writing lol i better catch up on vines and thorns too ðŸ˜› love tht one
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