Hope and Insecurities - SwaRon OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: preitygal99

Hey Nivi!!!

Thank u so much for that appreciating comments

I was infact i am Too nervous

Anyways...Accepted you buddy request

 

I dont know whether i will write up anything next or not...This was just the passing thought and today being no work day thought to pen it down

U know na...Empty mind devil's Workshop 😆

 

Thanks a lot again

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

I like the concept and story.. also the fact that they remained true to their characters.. A good first attempt i would say..!:) wats ur name by the way? i have interacted with u before but i can't recall ur name.. 

Thanks for appreciating

Hi prachi.. m shalini.. i think i'l complete that OS.. i owe it to ppl like u who genuinely liked it.. but m lil busy this weekend so mayb next week..

Awesome os !!

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

Hi prachi.. m shalini.. i think i'l complete that OS.. i owe it to ppl like u who genuinely liked it.. but m lil busy this weekend so mayb next week..

Are u gonna continue with this one or is it complete?

This was meant to be purely an OS...So wuld not be continuing this one n ya surely wait for u to update ur OS..DO not forget to PM Me

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

Awesome os !!

simple and beautiful .

felt really nice after reading the whole os.

do write more on SwaRon...

Thank U so much...I did not expect so many ppl to comment n atually encourage me to write more...Thanks really

Well well I came here because i hadnot check my msg and scraps for many days now...and what i saw was a msg saying you have written a SwaRon OS...

Now as you know I am dead tired reading for CA Finals now and i had no idea's to read any more Stories on IF but i wanted to see that how a CA can emote a Love Story so came here to read and how glad i am that i cannot even say...

 

Anyways a perfectly described long distance relationship...they way you have showed their convo's was just mind blowing... I mean you write like a perfect writer...i guess writing seems like your hobby the way you have presented this i can only make out that...

 

It was just beautiful the way sharon was surprised to know swayam was asking her to go for tour and was ready to wait and confidant that this phase will also work out in their relationship and usage of waiting for 5 years was just supreme...

 

And I just loved the way final confrontation came it was just beautiful...it was simple yet it can glue up certain eyes in spring seconds...because to read sharon saying something like I LOVE YOU to swayam is always captivating...so kudos to you for writing a perfect peice of work...Bow Down to your creativity...and ya of course the language was just awesome it felt like I am reading a book written by an established author...

 

Well well Madam CA and CS take this fether into your cap that you are a marvelous writer...keep on writing more and more boss...

 

Thanks for PM

 

Pratik...

Splendid work and very swayamish 😳 BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troup😉 kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.🥺😆 a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.👍🏼 The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot down😎Truly how I love SwaRon❤️ Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu  sharon the diva

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Well well I came here because i hadnot check my msg and scraps for many days now...and what i saw was a msg saying you have written a SwaRon OS...

Now as you know I am dead tired reading for CA Finals now and i had no idea's to read any more Stories on IF but i wanted to see that how a CA can emote a Love Story so came here to read and how glad i am that i cannot even say...

 

Anyways a perfectly described long distance relationship...they way you have showed their convo's was just mind blowing... I mean you write like a perfect writer...i guess writing seems like your hobby the way you have presented this i can only make out that...

 

It was just beautiful the way sharon was surprised to know swayam was asking her to go for tour and was ready to wait and confidant that this phase will also work out in their relationship and usage of waiting for 5 years was just supreme...

 

And I just loved the way final confrontation came it was just beautiful...it was simple yet it can glue up certain eyes in spring seconds...because to read sharon saying something like I LOVE YOU to swayam is always captivating...so kudos to you for writing a perfect peice of work...Bow Down to your creativity...and ya of course the language was just awesome it felt like I am reading a book written by an established author...

 

Well well Madam CA and CS take this fether into your cap that you are a marvelous writer...keep on writing more and more boss...

 

Thanks for PM

 

Pratik...

Thanks my Lil Bro!!!

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Splendid work and very swayamish 😳 BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troup😉 kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.🥺😆 a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.👍🏼 The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot down😎Truly how I love SwaRon❤️ Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu  sharon the diva

I just tried to pen down the emotions of couple in a long distance relationship!!! So Swayum was not going to be in the troupe but if this kept u reading till the end then i m glad that there was something in the OS to keep u hooked till the end.