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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Please update soon...Edited by Maya166 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maya166

Please update soon...

sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: daggarwal14

Riddhu nice update... .cont.. how he do this?..

thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear... kab update karogi...Please tell me!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maya166

Dear... kab update karogi...Please tell me!!!!

i have not started writing next scene. It takes minimum 2-3 hrs for me to write 1 part. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey first kill this Ashwin...i cant see my princess cry ..


plzz do something good in next update ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hey first kill this Ashwin...i cant see my princess cry ..


plzz do something good in next update ..

sure dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the comments. Here I come with my next part

PART 8

After sometime everyone go from there. 

R: let's have lunch

P: mujhe bhook nahi hai.

R: u have to eat priya. Apne aap ko dekho. Kya Hal ban chuka hai.

Food comes.

Ram serves priya food and then eats food.

Priya is trying to get up.

R: Kya hua?

P: mujhe washroom jana hai. Aap taklif mat kijiye I will go.

R: achha dekhata hu kaise jati ho akele.

She gets up and tries to walk but she is not able to. She sits on the bed.

R: ja sakti thi na?

P: kyu Asia keh rahe hai? Help kijiye pls.

R: ha chalo.

He makes her walk.

P: nahi chala ja raha. 

Ram picks her up in his arm.

P: yeh Kya kar rahe ho?

R: ab tumse chala nahi ja raha toh...

P: thank you.

He picks her up again and makes her sit on the bed and he too sits.

R: kafi bhari ho tum. 

Priya hits him with the cushion.

P: par apse kam hu.

R: bas bht Mazak ho Gaya. So jao.

P: aap idhar hi hai.

R: ha me idhar hi hu don't worry.

Ram makes her sleep.

P: thank you mr kapoor

R: your welcome

Ram sees her and smiles.

R: mujhe Kya ho raha hai? Kahin mujhe pyar toh nahi. Me bhi Kya soch raha hu pyar kaise ho sakta hai mujhe. 

Evening priya gets up and sees ram sleeping.

P: thanks mr kapoor for what all u have done for me

R: it's okay priya.

P: aap jage huye hai?

R: ha priya.

Priya hits him and then lies down on the bed. Ram sees her.

R: Kya hua? Or nahi marna?

P: nahi I am sorry. Mr kapoor me room me bore ho Gayi hu. Kya me lawns me nahi ja sakti?

R: sure but Akele kaise?

P: aap hai na?

R: hello! Tumhe me uthake itni mehenat nahi Karne wala. Samjhi?

Dadi hears this and enters the room and comes inside.

Dadi: golu jo bhi priya Kahegi tu manega. Agar nahi mana toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. Samjha?

R: ji dadi.

Dadi goes and priya laughs.

R: haso bht Maza aa raha hai na?

P: ha aur nahi toh Kya?

R: kab jana hai neeche lawn me?

P: abhi.

R: chalo betho 

P: ji.

Ram picks her up and takes her to the lawn.

R: Khush 

P: ha bht Khush.

R: haso haso aur haso ek bar thik ho jao phir dekhna.

P: Dekh lenge 

They reach the lawn and ram makes her sit on the bench. Dadi comes

Dadi: puttar kaisi hai?

P: thik hu dadi. 

Dadi: hath dikha Zara

She shows her hand.

Dadi: kyu nahi bataya hame uske bare me?

P: i am sorry dadi

Dadi: me andar ja rahi hu tu baith 

P: ji dadi

Just then neha and vikram comes

N: fatty kahan ho tum?

R: me idhar hu. Aa idhar?

N: are priya kaisi ho?

P: me thik ho. 

N: fatty tum ek baar police station jake sab check kar lo.

R: ha neha me jata hu tumne baat toh sahi kahi. Now we can't take any risks.

P: mr kapoor room tak chodke jaiye fir jaiye police station 

R: ha Chodta hu 

Ram picks up priya and keeps her on the bed in the room and goes with vikram.

N: yeh ram itna badal kaise Gaya?

P: kyu Kya hua?

N: tumhara kitna khayal rakh raha hai

P: abhi rakh rahe hai bad me bhul jayenge ki unki ek wife bhi hai

N: tab ka tab dekhte hai.

P: ha

N: Maza aa raha hai.

P: Kya Maza? Us ashwin ki wahah se me chal bhi nahi pa rahi hu.

N: ho jaogi tum thik. Don't worry

P: mujhe toh yahan rehekar hi bhukar ho jayega. Kitna bore ho jati hu? Tum bacho ko bhi idhar le aao. Thoda tp toh hoga mera.

N: not a bad idea.

P: ek kam karogi vo rack se book de do. Chal pati toh khud le Leti

N: ha yeh lo. Me thodi der me ati hu bacho ko leke.

P: thik hai

Dadi comes to priya's room. Priya sees her. She tries to get up.

Dadi: bethi rahe priya. 

P: ji.

Dadi: bore ho rahi hogi?

P: ji.

Dadi: neha k bacho k sath wakt guzar lena.

P: ji

POLICE STATION

R: can I meet ashwin?

Inspector: yes sir

Inspector takes them where ashwin is there and they see ashwin getting beating

R: kyu kiya priya k sath aise? Cos of u she isn't able to walk.

A: bht dukh ho raha hai. Agali bar Niklu toh usse zinda nahi chodunga.

R: khabardar!! Agar Asia kuch Karne ka socha bhi. Chal vikram. Inspector he should not be out of this jail. Please keep that in mind.

Ram leaves from police station and goes home.

KAPOOR MANSON

Priya is busy with the kids and neha is too enjoying with them. Ram sees priya playing with them and is smiling.

R: bachha party!! Kya ho raha hai?

Kids: kuch nahi!!

R: abhi priya Aunty ko aram Karne do kal khelenge 

Kids: thik hai.

Kids and neha go home. 

Ram is sitting and doing office work and priya is reading a book. She is getting bored now.

P(murmurs): kyu Jane Diya bacho ko? Khud toh office ka kam kar rahe hai or me bore ho rahi hu. Polar bear!!

R: kuch kaha

P: nahi

R: tum kuch keh rahi thi

P: nahi me apne aap se baat kar rahi thi mr polar bear

R: mujhe polar bear kaha?

P: nahi deewaro ko. Aapko problem?

R: mujhe Kya problem ho sakti hai? Jo bhi Kehena hai Kaho.

P: thanks me ja rahi hu. 

R: tum kyu uth rahi ho?

P: itna bhi nahi laga ki me chal na pau khud.

R: thik hai jao.

Ram sees her getting up and starts laughing.

P: Kya hai?

R: kuch nahi

P: kyu hase?

R: meri marzi mrs hitler

P: hitler???

R: ha kyu

Priya hits him 

R: ouch!! Chod do.

P: ha chod rahi hu. Bye!!

Priya gets up and walks two steps and is about to fall. Ram reaches her and holds her.

R: Kya hua? Batao?

P: i am bored. 

R: bas yeh baat bolo Kya karna hai?

P: I want to go for a drive.

R: thik hai chalo. I will go and change. Tum laptop band kar do.

P: ji thik hai.

Priya switches off the laptop. 

To be continued


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update ...ram ko priya se dhere dhere hole hole chupke se ho gaya hai pyar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alya1991

Nice update ...ram ko priya se dhere dhere hole hole chupke se ho gaya hai pyar...

thnx dear!!