FF: BALH ye dharti nadiya or tum prt26

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Posted: 2012-10-18T03:52:43Z
  1. Hey guys!! I am back with a new ff. But it's not at all related to the current track. 
I know I am very late. I am writing how I wanted ashwin issue to be held. So here I start writing..

Ashwin called Priya late at night. Ram gave her the cell and told to switch off the lights n pick up the phone. So Priya was not able to understand whose phone it was. So she thought it can be something important. So she picked up.

P: hello!!

A: hello Priya!

P: kaun?

A: Priya me ashwin.

Priya cuts the call. She thinks how dare he calls me at this time. 

P: ab kya karu? Mr kapoor ko Batana toh chahiye nahi toh koi misunderstanding hui toh?
Is bare me subah sochti hu abhi so jati hu.

MORNING

She calls her dad but unfortunately her mom picks her up.

Shipra: hello Priya kaisi hai tu? Aaj subah subah phone?

P: me thik hu ma. Aap kaisi ho? Kya kar rahi ho?

Shipra: aur kya karungi Diwali ki tayari kar rahi ho. Tu thik hai? Teri awaz bujhi bujhi lag rahi hai?

P: ha ma mujhe kya hon a hain me bilkul thik hu. Ma papa kahan hai?

ShiPar: vo toh market gaye hai.

P: me bad me call karti hu.

Shipra: kabhi mujhse bhi apni dil ki baat share kar liya kar?

P: ma aisi koi baat nahi hai. Achha baat yeh hai ki kal me Mr Kapoor k office gayi bonus dene toh vahan pata chala ashwin ne vahaan job le li hai. Or kal raat uska call bhi aya. Mujhe lagta hai mujhe Mr kapoor ko sab bataana chahiye.

Shipra: kya yeh ashwin? Tera pee ha kab tak karega ? Pagal ho gayi hai kya mat Bol Kuch bhi ram ko. Wakt ane par Bol dean but abhi nahi. Thik hai

Priya gets ready before ram and is sitting on the couch reading a book.
But not reading actually just disturbed because of ashwin.

Ram gets up.

R: good morning Priya !!

Priya is just lost thinking what she should do. Talk to papA or not?

R: good morning Priya!!!

P: good morning mr kapoor

R: kya hua? Tum thik ho?

P: ha me bilkul thik hu. Aap tayar ho jaiye.

R: ha thik hai
Edited by rampriyarocks - 2012-12-16T04:13:10Z
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Posted: 2012-10-18T03:53:28Z
PART 2

Priya and Ram are having breakfast

R: Priya tum sach me thik ho na?

P: ha mr kapoor. Apko kya ho Gaya hai?

R: nahi Kuch nahi. 

P: jaldi se breakfast kar lijiye fir humme office Jana hai. Mera toh ho Gaya. Aap jaldi se kha lijiye. Tab tak me books dal deti hu bag me.

R: par ye bag?

P: ha kyu?

R: tumne toh kaha tha ki special occasion pe use hogi.

P: ha toh yeh special occasion hai. Aap nahi jante ki mujhe teaching kitna
Pasand hai. teaching mere liye sirf mera job nahi passion hai. Aaj tak bacho ko padhaya tha ab employees ko bhi dekh lungi.

R: that's good Priya. Chalo chalte hai.

They reach office. Ram introduces Priya and goes.

Priya starts and sees ashwin there. And then she ignores him. She starts and it's 1 hr and suddenly ashwin phone rings n he tells her it's shrutis call n Priya tells him to get out. 
class is over.

Priya goes out. 

A: Priya itni bhi narazgi kya?

P: ashwin how dare u tum hamari purAni friendship aise sable samne.

A: m sorry Priya. 

P: not Priya. Mrs Priya ram kapoor or u can say mrs kapoor or mam.

A: sorry mam.

P: that's better.

Priya goes to rams room

R: ho gayi tumhari class?

P: ha ho gayi bht maze aya. Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki me employees ko Pada rahi thi. Thanks.

R: thanks kis liye?

P: apne mujhe Iske liye allow kiya. Isle liye thanks.

R: Tumhare pass kabiliyat hai is liye tum yeh kar rahi ho.

P: agar aap permission hi nahi dete toh kaise kar pati. Thanks.

R: it's okay

Priya picks up a pen.

R: Priya bura mat manna but kya tum kahi aur bait ke apna kam kar sakti ho. Mujhe room me akele baithna pasand hai.

P: ohh it's ok. Vaise bhi mujhe Kuch ppt me office staff ki help chahiye.
Me chalti hu

Priya goes out and calls aryan.

P: Aryan kya tum ppt me help karoge?

Aryan: mam vo mujhe sir ne ek file di hai isliye mujhe vo complete KARNA hai.
M sorry mam

P: it's ok. Koi help kar sakta hai?

Aryan: ashwin kar lega aapki help mam

Ashwin: Aryan kya hua? 

Aryan: ashwin tum mam ki help kar do sir ne mujhe ek file di hai. Unhe ppt me help kar do.

Ashwin: ha thik hai. Mam chaliye.
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Posted: 2012-10-18T05:28:05Z
continue continue
i like it , in all the sep of raya the memories of when they were saath is so good!! kee pwriting Clap
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Posted: 2012-10-19T23:08:27Z
part 1

nice start awww u bring back the RaYa memories to us... nice start with aswin track... but i think it was same as show... but let's see what store for us in next...
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Posted: 2012-10-19T23:24:17Z
part 2

awww Priya putted aswine on his place so nice... sweet n cute small RaYa moment... awww btw end i think end was diffrent but not sure waiting for next do update soon...
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Posted: 2012-10-20T02:58:25Z
Originally posted by leo4ever


continue continue
i like it , in all the sep of raya the memories of when they were saath is so good!! kee pwriting Clap
thanks. sure will continue soon
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Posted: 2012-10-20T02:59:02Z
Originally posted by leena04


part 2

awww Priya putted aswine on his place so nice... sweet n cute small RaYa moment... awww btw end i think end was diffrent but not sure waiting for next do update soon...
thanks
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Posted: 2012-10-25T08:24:24Z
Sorry for making you all wait for so long. here is the next update.

PART 3

Ashwin takes Priya with him.

A: mam aap baithiye idhar me abhi aya.

he goes to sid and mamaji to tell this. 

Sid; ye toh bht achhi baat hai. all the best

A: thanks sid. yeh sab tumhari vajah se hai. me chalta  hu vo intazar kar rahi hogi.

Sid: yes go.

Ashwin reaches to his table little late. it was half day so employees had gone. she was alone with ashwin n ram was busy with vikram in a video conferencing.

A: I am sorry mam. ab bataiye kya karna hai?

P: zara meri ppt banane me help karo. yeh sab type karo.

A: ok mam. but apko nahi aata itna asan hai yeh sab?

P: nahi ata. tum karo.

A: mam me apko sikha deta hu. 

P: nahi pls tum karo.

A: mam aap isi bahane sikh bhi jaogi.

P: no ashwin. please u do.

Ashwin catches her hand and keeps on the mouse. she tries a lot to take out but not able to.

P: ashwin band karo. leave my hand.
( she starts crying while saying this)

But Ashwin doesnt stop. he holds her hand very tightly. 

P: please leave me

A: mam dont panic. see like this we put our hand on the mouse. 

P: ashwin leave my hand. 

A: but mam see I am teaching you. Ram sir will be happy.

He tries to come close to her and then some how she removes her hand from the grip and runs away with her bag and he runs behind her but she has already gone out of the office.

he also leaves office.

she takes an auto and calls her dad.

P: (crying): papa!!

Sudhir: kya hua priya beta? tum ro kyu rahi ho?

P: aap kahan ho papa?

Sudhir: me park me hu.

P: papa kya me aa jau udhar? ma ko mat bataiye

Sudhir: ha beta aa jao.

she cuts the call..

KAPOOR INDUSTRIES

R: ye meeting achhe se ho gayi.

V: ha ho gayi

Ram becomes silent

V: kya hua ram?

R: vo na kal jab se priya bonus deke vapas ghar ayi hai khoi khoi lag rahi hai.

V: kya?

R: ha vikram or yeh ashwin ko jab bhi me dekhta hu toh lagta hai ki ise me pehle bhi mila hu. but yaad nahi kahan par.

V: so ask priya

R: tu toh janta hai hamara rishta.

V: tu agar is rishte toh samjauta manta hai ab bhi toh tu usse mat puch

R: nahi puchunga. chal ghar chalte hai

PARK

Priya comes to her dad.

sudhir: kya hua priya?

priya tells everything and cries a lot.

sudhir: beta tu ram ko bol de ashwin k bare me

P: par papa. 

sudhir: isi me teri bhalai hai. 

P: koshish karti hu. ab me chalti hu.

Sudhir: dhyan rakh apna.

P: ji papa.
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