You've magic in your hands. When you said you gotta be creative now, I thought you'd take some time to update but you've done it faster than I had thought!
The whole chap is really amazing, the lines you use really touches my heart each time I read it. It's really difficult to fight back your fears be it even for loved ones, but Manvi did it! But then you didn't make it look unreal; the circumstances you created for Manvi to give up her fear is absolutely wonderful, the conversation with a stranger and all. Then the 5-hour long date, gosh are you planning to murder with your skills😛!
And I don't care about the procedure when I have a beautiful piece of writing before me. Amazing it is!
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