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once upon a time-a chaste love story

its my new fanfiction on dkdm cast.

princess durga-daughter of himavan and mainvati.lovely girl.a warrior.sister of vishnu and accompanies him and chandrashekhar in wars.

chandrashekhar-king of kailash,very kind and compassionate but brave.best friend of durga and vishnu and fights with them against his rivals.

vishnu-son of himavan and mainavati and king of himalaya.has two sister,durga and ganga.best friend of chandrashekhar and cordial with daksha who hates chandrashekhar.his wife is laxshika.

ganga-sister of vishnu and durga.is in love with chandrashekhar.

princess satyavati-fav daughter of daksha and has two sister revati and rohini who are married to chandrama who is step brother of chandrashekhar.he hates him.

mahishasura-evil king of southern india,mahishpura.

other characters are same as the show

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its a story about 3000 years ago.there were four kingdoms.

north was ruled by chandrashekhar,south was ruled by mahishasura,east was ruled by vishnu(including himalaya chain except kailash)and west was ruled by daksha.

there was damn rivalry between these kingdoms except himalaya and kailash.vishnu and chandrashekhar were great friends.chandrashekhar's parents are rishi atri and mata anususya.his brother is chandrama.chandrama was tricked by daksha into marrying his daughter revati and rohini and he sowed seeds of hatred for chandrashekhar in his heart.now chandrama is like chief minister of brahmapura.

daksha has three daughters satyavati,revati and rohini.satyavati is friends with durga.mahishasura wants to abduct sati and for this daksha invites durga to be her guardian and as being a compassionate person she accepts it.story will start from her,with daksha's proposal to be bodyguard of her daughter to durga.

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hemavidz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Moni another FF from your side great yaar👏btw wat abt your previous one "When they cry - Flower of Hell"not yet completed 1st Gen n u told tat u planned for 2 Gens..going to write 2 FF's at a time😕n one more question is ur FF going to be similar as tat of FairyDreams???dont mistaken me dear CS sounds same as tat of FairyDream's😉 i hope you hv very diff story juzz like ur prev FF 😃

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warrenwarren

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Posted: 13 years ago

great cast and story,looking forward to read it.

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Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian
Moni another FF from your side great yaar👏btw wat abt your previous one "When they cry - Flower of Hell"not yet completed 1st Gen n u told tat u planned for 2 Gens..going to write 2 FF's at a time😕n one more question is ur FF going to be similar as tat of FairyDreams???dont mistaken me dear CS sounds same as tat of FairyDream's😉 i hope you hv very diff story juzz like ur prev FF 😃

yes i know its tough to handle two ffs at a time but don't worry i know my stories so its not like i have to think and write and also my typing is very very fast.

no its not like fairy dreams at all.my characters names are also different.

about when they cry,i will surely write that ff.i am not abandoning it at all.infact next update will be tomorrow.😉

though i am getting less comments than before there..

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Originally posted by: warrenwarren
great cast and story,looking forward to read it.

thank you.😳

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hemavidz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede
yes i know its tough to handle two ffs at a time but don't worry i know my stories so its not like i have to think and write and also my typing is very very fast.
no its not like fairy dreams at all.my characters names are also different.
about when they cry,i will surely write that ff.i am not abandoning it at all.infact next update will be tomorrow.😉
though i am getting less comments than before there..

tats really great 2 diff stories at a time👏abt less comments may b bcos of d break u gave n less Moharika moments 😳i knw u need time to update FF's apart from ur personal schedules its juz my opinion dear all the best for both of your FF's hope more people will read the both 😃

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Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

tats really great 2 diff stories at a time👏abt less comments may b bcos of d break u gave n less Moharika moments 😳i knw u need time to update FF's apart from ur personal schedules its juz my opinion dear all the best for both of your FF's hope more people will read the both 😃

well i am not that type of writer who unnecessary thooson romantic moments and pull out important things.that fanfiction is very gorey,romance will be there but i can't ruin my story.i hope you will read it till the end otherwise i will only just abandon that ff.and yaar break to chahiye he na,exams imp hain.

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chapter-1-abduction plan

it was a beautiful sunny morning.the birds were chirping,flowers were blooming and everything seemed extremely calm.suddenly a soldier came running to daksha who was then talking with prastuti.

soldier-maharaja daksha ke jai ho.

daksha-kya hua sainik?

soldier-maharaja,hamara guptchar ek atyant shubdh kar dene waala samachar laya hain.

daksha-aisa kaun sa samachaar hain.

soldier-maharaja,mahishpur ke asur,mahishasura raajkumari satyawati ka apaharan karne ke yojna bana raha hain.

prastuti and daksha shocked.😲

prastuti-us dusht ka itna saahas ke wo hamari putri ka apaharan karna chahta hain.maharaja aap abhe use yudh ke liye lalkaarein.

daksha told soldier to go.

daksha-nahi maharani,hum aisa nahe karenge.

prastuti shocked.

prastuti-maharaja,kaise pita hain aap,yahan putri par sankat aaya hua hain aur aap..

daksha-kisne kaha ke hum apne putri ke raksha nahe karenge kintu hum abhe abhe chandrashekhar se yudh karke laute hain,acchanak ek aur yudh karne ke shamta hamme nahe hain.

prastuti-to kya hum apne sati ko aise he jaane denge us dusht ke paas.

daksha-nahe,hum sati ke liye ek utkrisht rakshak laayenge.

prastuti-rakshak?

daksha turned-haan rakshak.

prastuti-vichaar to uchit hain kintu kaun maharaja?

daksha-DEVI DURGA.

prastuti shocked-devi durga.ye...ye aap kya keh rahe hain.

daksha-aapne sahe suna maharani hum devi durga se sahayata maangege hamari sati ke suraksha ke liye.unse behtar yodha aaj tak is sansar mein janm nahe liya,aur wo hamari sati ke behad priya sakhi bhe hain.wo mana nahe karenge.

prastuti-kintu wo maharaja himavan ke putri hain ,hum aise kaise jaakar unhe puch sakte hain.

daksha-hum prathna karenge,muzhe purna vishwaas hain ke devi durga hamara anurodh asweekar nahe karenge.😃

in sati's room.

revati enters-sati,sati...she was sleeping with her head inside the bedsheet.

revati-sati,sati ab uth bhe jao.

sati-sone do na didi.

revati-sati,surya devta sir par aakar tandav kar rahe hain aur tum ho ke so rahe ho.chalo utho.

sati opens her bedsheet-she was the most gorgeous woman in the whole planet.

sati-kya didi,utha diya aapne.huh...she got up.

revati smiled at her innocence.

rohini came running.she was looking very much scared.

revati-are rohini,itna dari hue kyun lag rahe ho?

sati-rohini didi,kya hua?

rohini-tumne suna nahe sati,mahishpura ke raja mahishasura tumhara apaharan karne ke yojna bana rahe hain,maine khud apne kaanon se suna hain.

sati shocked.

sati-kya?mera apaharan,maharaja daksha ke putri ka apaharan.ha ha ha...😆

revati and rohini😆

rohini-sati tum has rahe ho?

sati-aur nahe to kya,mein maharaja daksha ke putri hun,kise ka saahas nahe ke wo hamare mehel mein pawn bhe rakh sake.

rohini-shatru ko kabhe durbal nahe samazhna chahiye sati.

sati's smiled fades.

revati-haan sati,mahishasura bahut he balshaali hain.

sati now scared.

rohini-ah...kintu...kya hua,hamare pitaji bhe kam balshaali nahin hain,wo avashya he koi yukti soch lenge.

sati smiled.😊-awashya.

daksha-chandrama,main aur prastuti himalaya ke aur prasthaan kar rahe hain,hamari anupastithi mein koi bhe truti nahe hone chahiye.

chandrama-aap nishchint rahiye maharaja,sab kuch ekdam utkrisht tareeke se sambhalunga mein.

daksha-😊muzhe tumpar purna vishwaas hain.

in himalayas..

vishnu and someone was practicing sword fighting.other person had his mouth covered.

vishnu-aaj hum tumhe harakar rahenge.

person-huh parihaas ka bhe koi samay hota hain.

vishnu-ah...he got injured.

vishnu did his move but that person saved himself.finally after fighting for 5 minutes.that person won as he pushed vishnu down.

vishnu got up and started clapping.

that other person removed his cloth.a beautiful face came out.her hair was long,her eyes was like a tigress.her beauty was unspeakable.she was the most beautiful person in the entire universe.

vishnu-bahut acche durga.

durga-ye to aapka aashirvaad hain bhaiya.she hugged him.

durga and vishnu were walking.

vishnu-tumne suna aaj maharaja daksha yahan padharne waale hain.

durga-accha,sati bhe aa rahe hain?

vishnu-nahi kintu koi gambheer baat lagti hain.unhone likha hain wo hamse aur tumse milna chahte hain.

durga-hamse.kintu hamse kyun.

vishnu-ab ye to unke aane par he pata chalega.

durga-wo to abhe abhe shekhar se yudh karke laute hain na.

vishnu-ha pata nahe kyun wo shekhar ke peeche pade hain,hamesha apna parihaas karvate hain shekhar se parajit hokar.muzhe to lagta hain devendra ke santaan hain,hamesha parajit hone ke baad shiva ya phir vishnu ke paas kise parajit chuhe ke tarah jaa kar dubak jaate hain.

durga smiled-aap bhe na bhaiyaa.😆

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow so a periodical fiction from your side awesome and wow this time u followed dkdm that's again awesome and lol viraj is mahisasura triple awesome and viraj wants sati lol..anyways very good start will follow this ff