OS|Arnav&Khushi||Dying to Breathe - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
OMG! πŸ˜­

This is heartbreakingly beautiful and depressing!! I so didn't need this, but I'm glad I read it - you're an excellent writer! πŸ˜­


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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Brilliantly written...very emotional😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Ouch! I kept scrolling and reading until there was no more...sigh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh
this was heart wrenching !
and when a guy like arnav is crying something is tragic big time!
ufff i feel so bad when arrogant and ruthless people cry (cus something big has to happen to make them them cry) and this was exceptional!

loved it to bits<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Ufff...u made me cry my eyes out...so painful...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am going to sleep with tears in my eyes. Damn, your friend really wanted to exercise her lacrimal glands, didnt she? Lol! Great work, nonetheless. First time hearing the song. Thanks for introducing a new artist to me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
I don't know what to say. After reading the OS i am not able to breath.
You are amazing and there is lot of depth in your narration. Its mesmerizing. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
I can't write anymore as I am concentrating on controlling my tears.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
I'm crying right now!!

This was so sad...so emotional!! How will I sleep now after reading this OS!!
The last part where she was begging him to set her free was so painful!! and he did that,what a difficult decision it must be for both of them!!

Beautifully written Shiz...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
It was so beautifully written and so heartbreaking. I couldn't stop myself crying but still had have a laugh when I read "khushi was not khushi, if she didn't have the last say".
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
i did not realize that i had held on to my breath...and only let it go at the last word...
captivating...