ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141 - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
great...simply suprb so arnav thinks bad about kushi and his family too...liked everything...waiting for ur next update...so i think ur first few updates will be about their past..interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful start..cant wait to read more 
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww i feel really sorry for the khushi 
poor her she has to suffer this cuz of her mom... =(

pm me wen u write again 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww, continue soon dear!
This is my fav of all your works!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing start, Appy!!  👏 Thank you so much!!!  I feel so terrible for Khushi!! 😭  She's so young and naive!  This is too good!!  Please, please continue soon!! Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
You write such hard hitting stories with fantastic concepts that I can never make up my mind which is my favorite...until I read this it was ONS2?...but after reading this one chapter, BFTW3 is my all time favorite.

My heart already breaks for this innocent 18 year old who has no idea what her mother is and her husband is using her and is under the impression at she is just like her mother...wow.  Can hardly wait for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! brilliant! so Arnav is using both mother and daughter poor Khushi she is unaware of her mother's deed...she will be shattered when she'll learn the truth...poor soul 
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb start di
so he s faking in front of khushi to own d whole property
poor khushi... feeling bad for her
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome 
brilliant loved it...
waiting for khushi to know the truth of arnav and her mom...

haar bar bichari khushi ko hi sehna padhta hai sabki nafrat
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...thank you.