FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158) - Page 22

What a stirring update. The myriad of emotions is so enveloping. How calmly he tried to pry himself and his sister away from the darkness at the most gloomiest day of their life. So, so touching.

Khushi--start of something new.

Beautifully written.

Hey really love your story! Making Penpals us to be mysterious and exciting when we were kids...

Arnav's anguish and pain was so heartwrenching😭

Smitzy!!! Edited by asr13 - 11 years ago

What a powerful update.  The emotions for Arnav and Anjali were heartbreaking.  The anguish was in your writing.  Masterful.  I can't wait to see letters from Khushi to Arnav.  Look forward to your next update.  This is a great SS.  So different.

feel really bad for the siblings😭

dil tod diya is update ne

😭😭 o god y this happened...😭

Read all the parts so far!

you true have a very gifted writing style where you are able to make readers feel the emotion as opposed to just reading them...

was a great update and provided insight from the 1st part... hopefully we'll see the different emotions arnav goes through after reading his pen-pal letter...