Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL
okay now i read this earlier but didn't had time to comment so sorry for that😳
now coming to the OS..i really liked it...the song selection, the scenes you chose i really loved it👍🏼...i liked the whole concept of the OS..at least kahin pe toh sharon ka confession mila..once again really good attempt ...and haye swayam se guitar play karwaya...kuch toh hum par reham karna tha...😆really enjoyed reading it there r some lines which r really mind captivating to read...👏and now as promised ab khecai karna ki bari..😆so be prepared.😈..why do u always keep saying that u r a bad writer??? u urself r pretty aware of how u write and then the comments tell u that u r not a bad writer at all...u have got it in u and if this is the initial pieces of ur writing and u call it bad then u should really read my initial pieces (as per u i am a good writer😳) u would want to dig ur head in the ground.🤣...not lying🤓anyways ab kehna band karo that u r a bad writer😡...if u r a bad writer than i am still trying to learn English😆😳seedhe ho jao dude warna danda pare ga😛
,,,, and you really mean that than nice to see keep learning english...and i will read your first write ups than comment on anything about thme he he he he he...
Originally posted by: Mrunnu_TanHa
awwwiiee e... The OS was beautiful pratik ..
pata nai SwaRon kab ek honge .. but this OS is superb .. So beautifully written .. With all those memories which swaron had together .. wish palki wud just come up with such constructive ideas ..
hey Pratik😊
1stly very sru for being soo late...
are tim boltethe dat u can't write bt it's perfect..
so simple so sweet i just like wholl lines & d sng was perfect for it he is sach me "Diwana"❤️ every girl wish such Diwana in her life..😳...
sharon ko sach me esa kuch realizsn hojaye to just be like mrcal so sweet
Thank u so much for PM😃
Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Thnx a lot fr d pm! Its indeed a very nice nd cute OS wid a high dose of cheesyness which i liked obviously coz o swaron mein humhe thoda kam milta hai bt it obviously suits dem nd datz y v love dem to dis extent! Though in d show it wil nevr turn out like dis bt wud hv lovd it if dis wud hv happnd! Bt kya kare yeh crazy dreams sirf dreams hi reh jayenge bt hamare dreams kabhi khatam nahi honge kyun ki v r madly in love wid swaron nd wont stop imagining bout dem ri8??? Nd bdw i m realy sory bout nt commenting n ur ff! Was a bit busy wid xams! Wil coment soon though i promise! Nd thnx again fr sending d pms!
Twas beautiful Pratik...high time we saw Sharon breaking that shell she has built around herself and acknowledging to herself more than anybody else the kind of effect that Swayam has on her life and how she is incomplete without him...as much as he is without her...romantic and cheesy as far as Sharon is concerned, but the need of the hour...do keep writing more coz ur thoughts r free-flowing and relatable...
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