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'SAUZ WALA LOVE"...a short story on TAAREY
INDEX ::
PG 1--- PART 1 n 2
PG 3--- PART 3 n 4
PG 4--- PART 5
PG 5--- PART 6, 7, 8
PG 7--- PART 9
PG 8--- PART 10
PG 10--- part 11
PG 11--- PART 12 ,13, 14
CHARACTER; TAANI SHEKHWAAT; REYANSH SINGHANIA
TAANI sitting in a bench outside the d DANCE camp .
TAANI sitting in a bench outside the d DANCE camp .
achanak rey aata haii
R- tum soi nhi ab takπ₯±
T- ap vii toh nhi soye
R( in his mind) tum sone dogi tab na.
T- Kuch kaha apne?
R- nil aur bharat ke kharate...
T( smiles) vai so gaye?
R- use toh mauka chhiye sharon kii sapne dekh rha hoga , khair jab hum dono ko neend nhi aa rhi haii walk pe chaale.
Tt- walkpe?
R- bohot beautiful haii jaga raat mein aur khobsurat lagta haii.
T- chhaliye. rey and taani walking,
rey tells taani- 'aisa koi rule nhi haii kii walk karte karte baat nhi kar sakte.
T- kya bolu
R- thinks for a while, jodhpur ke bare mein
T- smiles, jodhpur! bohot alag haii mumbaii se, reth ka sahar, nachti hui mor ka sahar, apne kabhi mor dekha haii, rey was absorbed in taanis story, he jst nodded his head in no.
T- mein chhat pe ja kar dekh ti thi vaise toh barsaat me mor nach te haii bohot rarely woh nazara dekh no ko milta haii
R- well barsaat ke liye toh mumbaii famous haii yahaan barasaat aksaar mohabbat mein rang bharta haii
taani feels a little blushy blushy
R- taani! tum seek sawal puchho?
t- kahiye na.
r- tum itne raat ko mere sath akelii chali aayee shivam ko pata chalega woh mind nhi karega.
taani's face turned pale she feels hurt and turns her face, wipe out her tears and turn bk
T- rey aap hamesha shivam ko beech mein kyon le aate haii
R- beech meinto main hoon
T- mujhe jaana chhaiye plss wapass chale mujhe neend aa rhii hai .
she starts running guilty rey follows her
R- taani stop! ruko taani! taani taani stops
t- aap kabhi nhii samaj sakte kyon apke 1 bar bulane par mein chali aayee.
R- sorry im sorry pata nhi kaise hurt kr deta hoon tumhe
T -hurt toh kr te haii aap, phir vii mein aaj kehna chhatii kii kyun mein aap ke saath gayii, bcoz i trust u, mein khud ko aap ke saath safe mehesoos krtii hoon par kyon aap na samajenge, nhii aap chhate samaj na.
she runs towards her room
R- stands alone perplexed and hurt...
to be continued
(this part of the story was originally posted by shirsha...i am posting it on her behalf...)
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