How sweet bhavita...
all the emotions of a father who was in army n missed the lovely moments of his daughter's life written so well by you yaar...amazing
I loved how CV included all those small things, Nidhi writting letter to him, made cake for him when he came...appreciating role of Shyama and DB and loving and adoring ashu as her life partner...
True...a mother would have play a vital role in Nidhi's life but then, she got two...π
Last parah is written so beautifuly dear...i m in awe of this OS...
great work bhavita and thanku so much for sharing it
luv ya dear
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Thank U so much ana π³
Very happy that u liked it π€
I really appriciate ur detailed comments π
Thanks once again π³
N love u too β€οΈ
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