OS:Nafrat Paas Aane Na De,Mohabbat Dur Jaane Na De - Page 2

Liked it a lot, feel really sad for these two lovers who cannot get their share of love due to their destiny

Why OS /SS ? make this an FF. This is excellent. Now i believe the whole tag line of the show is meaningful. Arnav couldn't love her properly and Khusi just couldn't hate him..
It's so sad to see them both like this . But you managed to describe it beautifully.
Continue soon and thnx for the PM... 

Very interesting take but hope this is not how it happens in the show! Love openly or freely or then don't love at all. Thanks for the pm...please do continue and pm me! 

wow beautifully written dear...simply amazing but for once i wish this does not happen in the show...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

Great concept hope you continue it

Painful, Yet Beautifully Written . Pleashhh Continue This 😳

great concept dear
liked it
continue soon

👏absolutely beautiful

loved it 2 bits

plzzz update sooon

n thank u 4 a new ff

👏

Splendid!!!

So beautifulll written.. hats off to you... i loved the OS