Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 34

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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Superb update Mini devil. I will start with my similarities first 🤣 this update there's not much but yes, my anger. Usually im cool and composed but my anger is BAD for myself and everyone around me. I dont get angry easily and when I do i get mad 🥱 then photo editing and merging capability.. wah.. tell me you stole it from me 😛 🤣 I did...I couldn't help having a bit of fun with that😆I didn't consciously put the temper part, it was all how I thought Pia was😛

I knew Abhay and Pia would leave a permanent significance on their mind and they did. Cupid Alina - good on her part she sent Pia to Kolkata so that she can meet with Abhay. Abhay's loneliness and Abhay's hidden self was described beautiful. Pia is actually people - phobic, poor her. the reason must be related to her family I guess. Pia and Abhay just need each other because their comfort level is so different and deep. they meet just few times but they seem to know each other too well and even without communicating I assume they do. How strange!

What surprised me if Pia agreed to live with Abhay so easily. I mean its unlikely for a person like her and she could have just pretended some a day or some days and Im also surprised Abhay asked her to live with him. 😆 Abhay was desperate and he had n one to ask...and Pia was, let's say, influenced by someone😉

The Aaliya part was hilarious 🤣 and the Pink rag shouldn't leave Abhay's mind so easily 😉 I really hope Abhay can now help pia getting out of her people phobic and she will certainly reduce his loneliness. Yup she will certainly reduce the loneliness factor but keep in mind that she will be leaving in six months😉 Whats with everyone n the pink rag😛

Originally posted by: bellaaa

sorry not replying last 2 chappy but due to examzz i was not online
aswome last 2 chappy
finally abhiya met and love the new piya nature and like the scene of resturant and when abhay praise piya and she had tears in eyes...
like alina too doing this to abhiya
finally wow abhiya in same city and tooo gud scene when piya came in lingerine and abhay stare her
cont soon

Originally posted by: koli97

wohhh Sheraya Kolkata ka yaad aa gayi dearr😊Lovely update dearr👏& last part awsomeee😉continue asap😊

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesome update shreya.👏..and awesome writing!!!love how alina's playing cupid between abhiya!!! loved each and every scene here👍🏼...abhay and piya living together, that will be interesting...though piya agreed so quickly,😲 wondering about that.😕..that last part was hilarious...piya coming out in a nightie..😆.hehe...them living together's gonna be fun..

Originally posted by: coolwaters

hey i really liked your ss... very nicely written

Originally posted by: sdoll

Awesome update shreya👍🏼. Enjoyed a lot while reading. AbhIya convo were too good.😎 I must say pia is a very smart girl, the way she shooed aliya it was interesting to me but that dumbo abhay😡..he called that nightie a rag!!!!😆 i wish if he was more romantic at that moment but hope he'll be soon...☺️

Originally posted by: abjeya

abhay and pia in a house.R O M A N C I N G. just saying. loved it.can't wait for the next update

Originally posted by: ilove99

yup its realy a good decision to make pia stay with abhay 😉 loving it 😆

Originally posted by: vmpy

Fantastic.i think leena hav deleberately send piya kolkata.she hav something in her mind regarding abhyia.loved piya this new avatar.piya shifted to abhays place wow.thanx for pm.i really like da depth of dis story.continue soon.

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119

Heheheh nice update 😆 I'm liking the way the sotory is shaping up 😆