Virika in canada new story lAST PART - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow what any amazing update!!!!!!!!!😛😃 PM when part 23 is updated😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon ! it was amazing... and a call from india looks like interesting but i just hope nothing goes bad... pls continue soon and waiting for your next update to blast. 23rd... wohoo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...👏
continue soon and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
y did u forge t to pm me dude?
it was nice! waiting for the suspense to be revealed
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Posted: 12 years ago
super awesome update:) call from india interesting... cant wait for ur next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee...continueee soon... :) pls PM me... thnkzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb!!
hey i hate suspense yr! :((
update it soon before i go mad bcoz of the suspense..i hope he doesnt have to go back there and he stays with jeevika ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating on eid for u guys Eid mubarak love u all
Recap: Viren received a call from india and he is shocked
Part 23
Viren just cut out the phone , he couldnt listen to it anymore. Viren doesnt know how to react , he was still in the state of a big shock . Viren put his hand on his chin and after on his forehead and finally he carressed his own hair . He JUST sat on the sofa and bend down his head and put his hand on his face .
jEEVika had never seen him on this state . She didnt know what to do . Viren was crying , tears was fallin on his eyes . jeevika could not see him on this state . She goes near him and sat at the floor and touch him.
Jeevika: Viren what happened ?
Viren didnt reply , it was like he is out of this world
Jeevika reask him the same question  Viren still didnt reply
Jeevika much louder : Virennn telll me what happened ?
Viren came to his sense: and hug her and he start wiping more
Jeevika: viren tell me ur scaring me  with eyes filling up
Viren: jee ,,, vi ka mom called and she said that dad had an accident and he is very crtiical,
Jeevika try to assure him that everything gonna be alright
Viren : jeevika u know im really close to dad i cant afford to loose him
Jeevika: i can understand , what are u waiting for to got india to him ?
Viren: Let me chek for tickets
jeevika : ill check it u go inform virat and go pack ur things
viren: thanks u so much tum na hoti to mera kya hota
Jeevika called the agent and ask him to book 4 tickets to india he tell her that there is only 3 tickets available , she said okay book 3 ticket and in the next flight book the last ticket and she closed the phone .
Jeevika go to her room and go pack  her things .
She called viren and told him that the flight is in 4 hours and they should leave .
Viren:  Jeevika ill come back soon , just pray for my dad
Jeevika: im coming with u buddoo
viren: what ? and manvi ?
jeevika: ticket was not available so she will come in next flight
viren: okay thanks once again
jeevika: have u inform virat about ur dad
viren: no i cant do it alone , i need someone support
jeevika : let;s meet up at the airport and we will tell him , dont worry im there
viren: thanks
Jeevika , viren . virat meet up at the airport
ViraT: Bhai why are u going to india ?
viren dont reply he dont know how to explain that to his little brother
jEEVIka: virat we will tell u in the plane , and she bend down her eyes
virat: why are u guys looking so sad ?
virat: something happened ?
viren was llost in his world , he was thinking about all the moment he spent with his dad , he was so close to him . his dad was like his best friend
The plane was now flying , virat was getting impatient
virat: bhai tell me now
viren look at jeevika n make her sign that it was the time now
Viren: look virat, mom called me and she said that papa had an ,,, viren couldnt continue
jeevika: ur dad had an accident and he is critical
virat: whatt ????
viren: yes virat ,
Vadheras boys was shattered both hugged each other to rassured themself
viren: virat dekhna papa humko dekar papa bilkul theek ho gayein ge
virat: haan bhai
After 15 hours, they finally reached to india !
THe driver was here to take them . Jeevika i think i should not come to ur place , ill go to the hotel cuz i cant go to my house without manvi
viren: no u come with us
jeevika: par
viren; no come for me
Jeevika feels akward but she agreed for the sake of viren .

*******HOPE U LIKED IT *****

I have tried to show the emotions of viren but dont know if it has worked do tell me !
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update continue soon and pm me ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its good :) emotions are well described too
update soon and pm me😊

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