Arshi O.S.-U R MY EVERYTHING **COMPLETED**

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Aamzingly good. Very well written. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Ohh god dis was sooo longgg. The emotions wer well described. Once again fantastic update.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Awesome way to make him realize the need to verbalize.

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Superb OS hai... 😳
Its beautiful.how u described.thr feelings...sometimes by telling eachother me sometimes not... 😳
Loved it...really..
So glad to hv read this...nd found u... 😳

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

@evrydayirabbave

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

that was such a sweet OS

long, but awesome!

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

He is so insecure abt his feelings ..

poor boy thinks lavish lifestyle wud actually drive his khushi crazy but he doesnt know she just wants him n only him ..😳

Forget abt 5 Star Room , the girl would wanna take him in secluded hut too 😳

Aww i always thought khushi is the little rosy shy one but here its arnav who took the crown !

everytym i read khushi's body being enclosed tightly around his strong those mascular arms gosh i cudnt help but pity dat girl but also same tym jealous !!🤣

i loved it hw u described her . n the moment u carved wherein in he was imagining to lick off dat paani puri ka paani was awww scene !!😳🤣

haila the line" ghabrao mat kabhi nahi chodunga" was just mindblowing!!!👏

The twist was amazing.. Both shocked!!

aww he wished her without her being in the view .. He is so freaking shy n timid.. all khushi !!😳

the convo was so stirring n emotional 😭

thank god she poured her heart out ..😭

The typical ASR finally admitted he loves the cheerful naughty khushi rather dan a silent one!!😳

Haila "u cud sing n dance wen HP was around" W*F 🤣

i can uderstand him getting jealous of NK , but Hp 🤣

hak hai tumhara line toh is my all tym fav .No doubt 😳

Haila imagine 2 yrs later dey confess 🤣 dis is arshi 😳🤣

Loved the confession scene .. i wish in the show he cud have used the same intensity in asking to forgive him

Neways loved the whole OS to the core😳

the whole emotions n all ..

The Hindi dialogues added the flavor to the convos ..😳

Khushi is lucky in every sense ..

P.S- u were right u really give treat at once .. i mean what was sat like 20 pages of OS on word 🤣 but glad i stumped upon it coz u expressed it in extremely sensuous way 😳 thank u for the index 😳

Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 11 years ago