The Apple of Our Eyes; Last Prt(27: Pg 62) - Page 48

sneha

@fanbalh

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

It was so touchinng dear...
was a very apt one...
must say u r a fabulous writer...
will be eagerly be waiting to get more frm u...
and thanks fir d pm dear :)

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deepa

@deepa1993

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

So nice yr.. Wonderf story.. Last prt is very emotional... Thanx yr for a fabulous ff..hope u write another ff...

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nutshell

@nutshell

Newbie

Posted: 11 years ago

Just amazing. Thanks for giving us this wonderful, emotional, witty, enjoyable FF. You are truly a fab writer. Will look forward to more of your writings :)

God Bless!

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rayaBALH

@rayaBALH

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

ossum yaar di till today i was a silent reader but at last comment marna hi pada...ur writing is ossum yaar plz continue ur writing waiting for ur next ff 😊 n 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 4 u😊😊😊😊

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crystal30

@crystal30

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Oh dear, that was such a fantastic end..wld definitely miss it. After office my only entertainent or rather I shld say the refreshers were the FF's. You don believe I've re-read the parts umpteen times as I cherished every moment of it. One humble request, please do come up with some more write ups, an yes from your end will put a huge 😃.

Thank you🤗

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

awesum .mindblowing superb y u have ended it aarti it was a pleasure to read it

keep writing wud luv to read it more😃

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Sacchi muchhi update bohat accha tha... End so soon thora aur continue karna tha naa..? Koi baat nahi.. Coming to this update just loved the opening of ur ff after the leap. P&P bonding is just inbreakable and that was the most lovely think in ur ff... From the first update to this last update u just rocked dear.. U justified the name of ur ff to the fullest, it was started on peehu and ended on peehu... Mindblowing.. Ur writing skills r just superb... Will wait for ur come back.. Edited by Pinkjali - 11 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hiii ..That was an awesome update dear ..LOved the ending that was very emotional and cute ending ...You have written very clearly and very well ..Hats off ...

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