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Posted: 19 years ago
awww... tht was good!!! cant wait for the next part. do PM me whenever u update. good luck with exams! =)
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Posted: 19 years ago
Pls Tanya pm me too whenever you update
Best of luck for your exams 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
hiya tanya excellent episode plz continue soon an gd luck 4 ur exams ❤️
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow dis story is rely good. 👏
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cant wait for da next part!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey dear
b'coz of all ur well wishes my exams are goin pretty well and my next chapter is ready and will be posted by sunday 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys dont kill me if u feel that this part isnt romantic.I dunno myself.Its upto u all.


Chapter 14

Recap: sameer tries to rape nimmo but kunu reaches on time

Todays chapter

The door suddenly opened.Kunal was shocked to see the whole situation.Before sameer could do anything further Kunal rushed towards him.he pulled sameer back with a jerk and punched him hard on his jaw

Kunu- u bas***d teri himmat kaise hui meri nimmo ko haath lagaane ki

K-mujhe to laga thaa ki yu usse pyaar karta hai par tu aisa karega maine socha nahin thaa.I will kill u.

Kunal was in such a fit of anger that he continuesly punched sameer.Blood ran out of Sameer's mouth.He was panting.Kunal was still beating him.Kunal just took a flower vase and was about to hit sameer when nimmo shouted

N- kunal nahin kunal mat karo aisa .Chhod do ise
K- nimmo tum jaanti ho ki aaj main naa aata to yeh kyaa kar chukka hota
N- jaanti hoon kunal lekin main ise sirf itna dard nahin dena chahti.
She turns to sameer

N- maine tumse sacha pyaar kiya sameer aur tumne mere saath yeh kiya.Man to karta hai ki tumhein yaheen khatam kar doon magar nahin itni aasaan maut nahin milegi tumhein.Pal pal maroge tum.zindagi mein koi tumse sacha pyaar nahi karega sameer.kabhi nahin.just get lost.get the hell out of here.

Sameer runs away frightened.nimmo breaks down in front of kunal.She falls down.she is crying

N-mere saath ye kyun hua kunal

N- main to usse sachcha pyaar karti thi naa fir mere saath hi kyun.
Kunal cannot see her like this.After all she was his love his life.He went to her and made her stand up.He wiped her tears.

K- no nimmo ab tum nahin roagi.tum is sach ka saamna karogi.chalo

He picked up her jacket and made her wear it.He kept his one hand on her shoulder and took her to his car.he made her sit and started driving

K- chalo nimmo tumhaare ghar mein yeh baat kisi ko bhi nahi pata chalni chahiye.ab bas tumhaara ghar aane hi walaa hai.

N- nahin kunal mujhe ghar nahin jaana. Aaj ghar pe koi bhi nahin hai aur aaj jo bhi hua main uske baad akele nahin reh sakti{she was still sobbing}

K- to kahaan jaayein nimmo

N- tumhaare ghar kunal

K- par nimmo main to vahaan akela rehta hoon. Tumhein uncomfortable to nahin feel hoga naa

N- no kunal I trust u more than myself
K-ok
He drives back to his bunglow.

Nimmo was still in a stae of shock and was still very frightened.when they both entered the bunglow it was dark everywhere.nimmo got frightened.

N-plz kunal lights on karo.mujhe dar lag raha hai.

K- main hoon na nimmo.don't worry and he switched on the light .then they both moived to his room.

In the room

Kunal gave nimmo one of his shirts and trousers to change.she went to the washroom.when she returned kunal went inside. He returned after 5 mins as he had forgotten to take his nightshirt{awwwwwwwwwww he is shirtless}. He firstly peeped out of the bathroom to look where is nimmo.he found her fast asleep on the bed.So he stepped out carefully as not to wake her.He went to the other side of the room to find his shirt.he took his shirt in his hand and went to the bed to take pillow .as he was about to go.Nimmo caught his hand

N- kunal tum to mujhe nahin chhodoge na

K-{ assuringly}- kabhi nahin

N- to abhi kyun jaa rahe ho

k- mujhe sona hai isliye doosre room jaa raha hoon

N- plz aaj mujhe tumhaari bahut jarrorat hai.plz mere paas so jaao
K-kyaa keh rahi ho tum.u know we r not married.Duniya kyaa kahegi.

N- tumhein bhi duniya ki parwaah hai meri nahin

And she starts cryin out again.

K- nahin nimmo.theek hai main yaheen hoon tumhaare paas

Nimmo made him lay down on the bed.she lay next to him still sobbing.kunal could not see her like this.he took her in his arms.she kept her face on his chest.

It was the first time kunal was so close to someone.Close to someone whom he loved very much.Yes he was too a human being.he too had emotions and emotions did flow in him.He was feelin so passionate.He wanted to kiss her and tell her that she was the most beautiful girl.He wanted to love her and make her being loved by him.He wanted to feel her there and right at that moment.He wanted her to know the passion he had stored in him for so long.He was melting.Melting,under her warmth,her presence,her touch. he wanted to be so close to her that there wud be no more distances.

For a moment he lost his senses.His hands went thru her hairs.then thru the back to her waist. He caressed her and looked deep in her eyes. But that moment he came back to reality.Wat he saw in her eyes was faith and trust.He could commit suicide but never break her trust..He knew this very well that nimmo was too emotionally weak that night and he could easily make her do whatever he wanted but then what wud be the difference left between him and sameer.By doing so he too wud have used her and he was not like sammer .he had to prove it to himself

Luv

Tanya


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Posted: 19 years ago
wow, this is so emotional. It is fantastic. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: chat_222

wow, this is so emotional. It is fantastic. 👏 👏 👏



thanx so much.But is it really emotional?????I felt it was borin😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwww greattttt job tanyaaaa
cont sooooooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww itz just amazing cant express in words
O SAYEEA NA JAO CHURA KE BAYEENA
NAHI TO MAIN RO PARUGI HO
YAAR REALLY ITZ AMAZING KAANU'S DIGLOUGS WOWW WELL WRITEEN
THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX A LOT 4 DA PM
itznt it different 4rom da precap
well done dude

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