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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

wonderful os

sad and painful but beautifully written

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Omg u made me cry its so heartwrenching but well written

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Nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wow...what an amazing piece of writing...it was tragic but it also had an element of beauty to it...

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shagun05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

oh!! its so heart wrenching... it made me cry.

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sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Shyam killed Khushi!
Your OS brought tears in my eyes.
I so wish that the Arnav in your story is rescued by someone, another Khushi, maybe?

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euphoria_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

reaes r rolling dowb fron ny eyes...butifully written tears r rolling down from my eyes .i cant watch what am i typing...butiful os

Edited by harsh_princess - 13 years ago

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Zania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Omg...tht was so heart wrenching & beautifully written ..i had tears in my eyes :(

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smitzy

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Thank you everyone for your lovely comments! 🤗

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Newbiesoapfan

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Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Smitzy-- has a very 70s Devdas feel to this... I can almost imagine RK or AB in this role -- RK as in Prem Nagar and AB in sharaabi !

Very angtsy and well written ! Should never happen!

Edited by Newbiesoapfan - 13 years ago

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laksh65

@laksh65

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

a sad os, but very beautifully written

pain of arnav portrayed was amazing thanks for the pm

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