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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

Goldie

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

love it to much to even say muaah

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

hey , whts wrong ? ur stories are always powerful, but this is so grim...I understand Khushi's plight though...poor girl ;(

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

his anger destroyed it all and she became asr with a vengeance very cold awesome thanks for the pm

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fffan123

@fffan123

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Loved it. Very heart breaking. Felt bad for Khushi

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Razz22

@Razz22

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

well... there is only so far you can bend before you break...

really well written 👍🏼

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I think this has a Huge potential to be turned into an SS!!!! Great work

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MAGDALENE MARIE

@MAGSTER

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Lovely os , I enjoyed it , khushi being so harsh ,arnav being so helpless , ,really nice

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

oh god...that was sad!!!

but beautiul...

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Ann

@ipkkndank

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

This is so brilliant dear =) =) =) Really i'm out of words =) =)

(well most of the time in your stories i think i have said this about numerous time =D)

You have written it brilliantly =) =)

Perfect =) =)

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772941

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

this was good...loved it...

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