OS : Closed Door - Page 4

it was fantastic...

I seriously want something like this to happen.  He better not break her heart this time.

This is good...I didnt just like it, I loved it...Can we ask for another part 😉

The End.
Seriously?!?!
You The Ended this so quickly!!!
Can you like, maybe turn this into a two shot or somfin'?
'Cause this is amazing!!!
Anyway, Vas Happenin'!!!!
I litterelly loved this story, it held so much depth, and I think you need to continue!!!!
Loved how you described Arnavs pain...
Awesome one shot and thanks for the pm :)

he deserved it. but you made Khushi ooc. i did not like that.

Awwe this was really sad 😭 But I like your writing style dear ! Thank you so much for the PM 🤗

Now that was something different; I could actually imagine Khushi like this... She sounded more like a speaking corpse to me. I loved how Arnav's realization was interconnected with the dream of his mother! That was beautiful!!👏
Edited by Barun.Obsessed - 11 years ago

you made me cry sarah!!!!!

THIS made me cry !! :'( 

I hope this never happens. Arnav HAS to believe her this time. 
Wonderfully written as always ! 

P.S: I am no more regular on IF. Busy in college. But I keep reading the FFs on your blog and reply there. Thanks for all the PMs ! Mwaah. 

Keep writing. <3 

Thanks for the PM. Amazingly written.