OS: Night Of Honour - Page 12

ayushma

@aycma98

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

what did you do? go into the CVs mind???? this is exactly how they'll show arnav making his decision, and this will definitely be his excuse...

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758054

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Posted: 11 years ago

very realistic OS! even if arnav does marry khushi then later they will have problems :( :( so i know its heart breaking but if arnav does not forgive garima before marriage , then i hope the marriage doesn't happen at all!!😭

very good OS!!! please write more!!!thnx for PM!

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711823

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg...that was beautiful...the story and your style of writing...truly in awe...

the scene was so poignant...intense...emotional...feel so bad for both of them...they are caught in a web not of their own making but equally binding due to the connections to their loved ones and themselves...

loved the way they were doing this because they loved each other not otherwise...

yet being an arhi fan, i sincerely hope it doesnt come to this...i hope their love will overcome not sacrifice itself...they need each other to get over this turmoil...if they ever can...

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Madhurya

@maddieee

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

this was nice but i am really worried dat der is a good chance of this happening in the serial😭... the way u have expressed the emotions is just brilliant

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Satina

@Satina

Goldie

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice job! Very well-written!!

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

thanks for the PM

sad OS

This OS made me cry, Dadi is so cunning

Arnav and Khushi is so self sacrificing

can't continue, at a loss for words

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

This was beautiiffuull! So very beautiful!

The emotions, the turmoil, the love! Aaahhh this was heaven!! Loved it !

Loveed how khushi thought she just HAD TO HAD TO talk to him.

Loved how arnav didnt amt to force anything on her againn!

I thought by the end of it, it'l be a happy ending but *sigh* guess not! But the prayer in the end is what completed it.

The prayer that even if she wasnt going to be with him, she wished him to be happy! Happy without her! I loved it!!

You should write more OS's! Not that i need to tell you but just saying! 😆

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Chandnii2

@Chandnii2

Senior Member

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...this is just..Have no words for it yaar! it;s too beautiful!! Loved it!

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Woah. I dont want this to happen.EVER. But somewhere I know that Arnav wont be angry at her. Why would he be? She's as innocent as him in this, maybe more. But there's pain ahead for them. I just hope not something like this. But you rock girl! Such a nice flow of word you have! Do write more OS's and some happy ones too plz! :-P

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264833

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aw :(
Beautifully written !

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