virika virman" life as we knw it" pt 81 pg 133 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i thoroughly love what you've written

and the title is after i one of my fav movies

so love it!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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:) thankyew all 4 da beautiful commentz its gud dt u all r lykng ma ff.. Guyz pmz r difficult take tym bt 4 u all em gna try it soon... 4 nw enjoy all luv u all 4 encouragement..<3 ff: viraman virika "life as we knw it" recap: manvi met vaderaz nd vaderaz r obliged wid da two new wud be bahuz ...        (scene start wid da chaudaryz nd vaderaz sittng around da dinning table 4 breakfast jeeman sittng togeather nd so are viren nd virat but dy r sittng accross eachodr virman front ov eacodr nd virika infrnt of each odr) manvi to herself:eb yeh mogambo order karbi day meray pait ma toh chuhay tennis khel rahay hn... (virat heard he blabbering) virat: kuch kaha tmnay??... Manvi: ni ni main kia keh sakti hn... Dadaji: 8 bj gaye naishta shuruh kia jaye... Manvi: shukar hai... Jeevika: mannu chup chap naishta kar... (here viren wz making hz spoon full of pasta bt stopped mid way bcz hz gaze stop at da beautiful creature infront ov him jeevika who wz making mannuz plate... Jeevika also looked at viren find him staring at her nd dy were stuck in da eye lock) "background music" male:ky dil seenay main tha magar ky dharka hi nai yeh teri ahetein isko day gai dharkan... Female: ky jbsay deka hai tjhay yeh nazrein hat ti ni ky dil main horai ik ajab c hal chal... Male: tu hi tu hai tu hi tu jeenay ki adaa.. Female:tu hi tu hai tu hi tu ha saanso ki wja... (deze lyrics r mine sm ov it of virika song zindagi ma aj lamhay) (virat nd manvi who noticed dz togeather cleared derez throatz) virman: ehum ehum... (virika came out ov da moment nd both of dm blushed lukng here nd dre) manvi: haan diii yeh kia ho raha tha? Nain mataka???... Jeevika: aek dun gi tjhay chup chap khana kha smjhi... Virat: pehlay kha lo bhai phr carry karna wid da sweet eyelocks... Viren: khanay py dehan day bhai humpay ni... (here virman exchanged smiled nd manvi acted as if holding her hand as mb nd lukd at virat who smiled noddingly) jeevika: mannu tera mobile kidhar hai... (all lukd towardz jeeman nd virat thought "eb kia karo gi bandriya eb maza aye ga") manvi: wo kia ha na dii main bahar ti mera pair phisla aur mb sarak pay gir gaya nd toot gaya virat b wahan pay tha usnay kaha koi baat ni wo mujy naya laa day ga.. Ku virat?? (manvi winked at virat nd viren also saw dz) virat: ji bhabi aisa hi howa...viren: sach main aisa hi howa bhai... Virat: ji bhai ap plz breakfast khayee... Swamini: jeevika, manvi tm dono yeh gravy taste karo bht tasty hai... (jeeman nodded nd poured da gravy in dre bowl nd manvi took a spoon ov da gravy nd taste it nd soon as she gulped it down she started coughng hard nd wz nt able to breath properly) jeevika: mannu kia how? (patted manvi back) mannu tu tek ha na... (all panicked viren nd virat wid vanshika stood 4rm dre seat nd went near manvi...) viren: mannu kia howa are u ok... Virat panickng: wtz rong.,. Vanshika: beta kia howaa?.. Manvi: diii diii ... (she cudnt utter a word just breathng heavily nd coughng all shockd swamini dada ji nd da odr chaudary were tense dn jeeka took da bowl nd smelled it nd face expression dropping) jeevika: beeji vinegar (beeji stood 4rm da seat nd came to manvi wid pinki madan nd dabbu all panicked) jeevika: mannu relax ... Dabbu upar meray bag ma medicine ha jakay jaldi lay kay aaa... (Dabbu ran nd came back wid da medicine nd gave it to jeevika, jeevika poured da syrup in water nd make manvi drink it nd aftr 5 mintz she wz back to normal all relaxed) jeevika: i am sorry every1 wo kia hai na mannu ko vinegar sy alergy hai... Dadaji: manvi beta ab tm tek ho na? (manvi nodded still pantng a little bit) swamini: thank God hum toh dar hi gaye thay... Vanshika: ji didi nd jeevika tmay humay pehlay bta daina chai tha na... Khair eb agay sy hum khyal rakhein gay... Swamini: humara naishta hogya shaam ky functn ki tyari b karni ha bhabi kadambari nd beeji ap aye... (all left da dinning table except b.beeji dabbu virika nd virman) viren: oh God mannu u scared da hell out ov us... Manvi: sorry jiju logo ki jan nikalna meri buri adat hai sory.. Nd chep tm apni shakal deko dnt wri srf alergy hai mari ni hn aur marun gi b ni abi tmari lyf ka band bjana ha meray future chep hubby... Jeevika: chup kar mannu warna aek du gi tjhay ... (nd dn she went to virat) virat ji aj tk meri mannu ki har zimaydari meri ti par aj say apki hai yeh li jay (she handed da medicine to virat) isko hmesha apnay sth rakhi jaga ku kay kbi b zarorat par sakti hai... Ap rakhein gay na meri mannu ka khyal virat: ji bhabi ap fikar mat ki jay main vada karta hn ky apki is pagal behn ka pura khyal rakho ga... Viren: haan fm ji dnt wri hum sb haein dnt wri... (jeevika had tearz dn mannu came nd hugged her 4rm behind) manvi: fm ji fm ji uff tauba dii ap thakti ni hn tensn lay lay kay... B.beeji: chup kar chudail tensn daina tera kaam hai par jinta mat kar ma abi marnay wali ni hn... Manvi: b.beeji ticket toh apko katwani paray gi tbi toh wo apkay sonay ky kangan ma harpo gi... Jeevika: mannu... Manvi: kia mannu dii apni tape ko mannu pay arao mat jb deko mannu mannu mannu eb ap viren ji viren ji karo mannu manu ni... (jeevika blushed nd virat nd viren smiled upon seeing mannuz tactics) b.beeji: besharam chudail tu mujy bta aj ma pink suit ky sath kaun c jewellery pehno... Manvi: b.beeji ap pink ni pehn ri ku ky pink ma pehn ri hn ku jy main dulhan hn... B.beeji: main toh pink hi pehno gi... Manvi: toh phr ap hi mrs virat vadera bnjao... (wid dt she ran) b.beeji: shaitan kahi ki... (viren patted viratz shouldes nd laughed) virat: bhabi yeh shuruh say aisi hai ya demag pay chot lag gai ti.. (jeevika smiled) jeevika: ni devar ji shuruh say yeh default hai... (wid dt dy all laughed thnkng mannu wz really a kid) (scene changes da vaderaz were down in da hall welcumng da guests nd viren nd virat both lukng 4 jeeman) viren: bhai zada besabra mat ho mannu ati hi hogi... Virat: exactly bhai same goes 4 yew bhabi ajaein gi control... Viren:oh toh mr.vadera badmashi haan wo b apnay baray bhai kay sath... Dnt be such a lawyer... Virat: i am nt u r being a detactive .. Plz bhai.. Let me wait 4 bandriya i wanna c woh kaisi lag ri hai (viren astonished wid virat behaviour nd smiled nd put hz arm on hz shoulder) viren: so u r already attatched to mine nd jeevikaz daughter? Haan?... Virat: bhai plz stop teasng... Viren: em so happy 4 u bhai (wid dt dy both hugged) (scene changed to upstairz where pinki madan beeji were w8ng 4 jeeman dabbu nd b.beeji were dowstairz nd dn two angelz came out ov da room omg both lukng just wow manvi wz wearing light pink anarkali frock long pearl earingz nd makeup nd jeevika wz wearing maroon anarkali wid lon bunday nd lukng beautiful) pinki: hayeee meri bachian nazar na lagay ... Beeji: sach main bht pyari lag ri ho tm dono par itna tym neechay sb intezar kar rahay hn... Manvi: wo kia ha na beeji us nikamay makeup artist ny itna wakt lagaya aur waisay b hum dulhan hn intezar toh karwaein gi na.. Beeji: manvi bs aek din keliye jeevika jaisa bartao kar meri bachi... Manvi: matlb sharmao aur viren ji ky khyalo ma kho jaon... Jeevika: aek paray gi mannu chup krja... Beeji: isay koi umeed ni ha eb rab hi sambhalay sb khair chalo neechay... (wid dt dy headed towardz dowstairz dn sm1 sed "hey luk i thnk dy r da brides" viren nd virat turned around nd were speechless to c da both angels in front ov dm both dre mouhs opened) swamini: viren virat plz mu band karlo humari bahon ko nazar na lagana... (virika lukd eachodr while jeevika wz heading down da stair: male: zindagi ma aj lamhay... Female: meri ankho ki toh manzil chehra hai tera) (virman lukd at eachodr too.. Manvi: wow chep toh ala lag raha hai gud gud... Virat: yeh bandriya itni adorable b lag sakti hai... Male: hua kia hua kia hua yeh pyar mujy b... Female:hua kia hua ki huaa) (dn vanshika nd swamini came nd took viren virat nd make dm sit on sofa nd beeji came wid jeevika nd manvi nd make dm sit opposite to their patnerz so it wz virika on left nd virman on right all were on da same sofa lukng at eachodr rest all were praisng da couples ) swamini: sach beeji dy lukng very beautiful.. Vanshika: ji beeji nazar na lagay thankyew itni pyari bchiyo keliye.. Beeji: aray ni swamini ji vanshika ji meray dono betay b kuj kum ni... (here virika nd virman were lukng at each odr) the end sorry guy next part will surly b roka nd jeevika dance ... Nd next part at nyt hopefully do comment nd giv feedbacks... Precap: virika virman roka rasam jeevika dance "lo chali main" nd karwa chauth ahead... Enjoy yushna here..<3 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
superb i just loved ur update plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
simply amazing...such a superb update...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nice update. Loved this part. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Just read all of your updates and all I can say is wow seriously Just loved it continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Liked it so much dear
Awww so sweet and cute update
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
thankyew all 4 da appreciation .. <3 u all r lovely ppl... Here da part all w8ng 4 enjoy nd keep commentng nd lykng ma work... Nd ya guyz pm z difficult..:( sorri ... Ff ehmmbh :virika virman "life as we knw it"CHAPTER 8.. Recap: manviz alergy nd roka started (scene starts wid virika nd virmaan eye lock) manvi: haan toh chep pati dev ma kaisi lag rai hn?? (virat smiled "thora mazak toh bnta hi ha mrs wud b virat vadera") virat: bhabi to by God bht beautifull lag rai hn... Ku bhai?... (manvi thnkng: oh toh mr vadera smartness ahan par ma b mrs vadera bnay wali hn chep ji keep dt in mind) viren: aray bhai tu mannu pay dehan day na jeevika ki tareef karnay keliye main hn na... Virat: jaleousy bhai? Oho par kiya kia jasakta hai jo cheez tareef laik hai ucki tareef toh karni parti hai , bhabi u luk smashing... (Jeevika blushing) jeevika: thankyew devar ji... Manvi: chep ji dosro ka haq marna chordo apnay haq pay claim karo lawyer hotay vay lawyer giri ni ati tmay... (virat leened closer to manviz face nd whisper manvi moved a little back) virat: apko bara law pata hai?? Manvi: apnay romantic panay pay control karo chep pati aur btao hw i am lukng.? .. Virat: sach kaho ya jhoot?... Manvi: chalo jhoot hi kehdo par kuj bako... Virat:oky toh tm bht bht buri lag rai ho.. (manvi blushingly smiled) manvi: aur tm b kuj kum ni lag rahay... Viren: oyee hoyee chep ji nd sherni ji kia commentng shmntng horai hai (jeevika smiled nd virman lukd down embaraced) virat:bhai meri tang khenchna band karo aur btao bhabi kaisi lag rai hn?? (viren lukd at jeevika) viren: fm ji toh roz hi sundar lagti hn... Manvi: wah jiju deko chep yeh hoti ha tareef ayee hayee nazar na lagay... (viren jeevika blushed) viren: waisay sali ji u r quite a beauty too... Manvi: thank u thank u jiju ap b dashing lag rahay hn...(wid dt virman nd virika smiled nd dadaji announced) dadaji: mohrat ka tym hogya hai bheenji aye rasam shuruh kartay hn... Beeji: ji vadera sahab.. Pinki thali pakra (wid dz beeji took da thal to virika nd does da aarti first dn put da tilak on virens forehead nd gave him shagun giftz nd dn did same wid virman put da tilak on viratz forhead dn gave him giftz dn vanshika came wid da thal nd wz abt to do da tilak to jeevika but stopped) vanshika: swamini didi viren ko bachpan say apnay pala hai isliye jeevika apki baho hoi islye ucka tilak karna apka haq hai main manvi ka karon gi akhir indono ki bhi do do saasein hn... (wid dat she handed da thaal to swamini nd swamini did da tilak ov jeevika nd gave her gifts dn handed da thal to vanshika who did da arti nd tilak to manvi nd gave her giftz, manvi thought dt hw pure vanshika aunty wz so sweet so she got up nd hugged vanshika infront ov everybody.. Viren smiled nd lukd to virat who wz touched wid mannu gesture nd wz lukng towardz mannu nd hz maa...) manvi: (while hugging) aunty ap bht achi hn... (vanshika wz touched nd attached to manvi 4rm da tym she came vanshika thought dt she got a daughter) vanshika: aunty ni bacha maa bolo.. (manvi wid teary voice) manvi: aek maa ki kami ti eb apko mil kay wo b puri hogai (nd dy hugged again virat wz smiling "sach bhai u were ryt mannu bht achi hai da way she z attached to every1 i hope ma ucko hmesha khush rakho") (dn virika went to dadaji took hz blessingz dn to every elder) swamini: sach beeji aj hum bht khush hain aj say apki dono betian humari hoi... Beeji: aur apkay dono betay humary... Pinki: hayee eb rasmein toh hogai eb kuj gana bajana b hoga ky ni.. (beeji glared to pinki who got scared nd lukd down) dadaji: ku ni hoga zaror hoga akhir aj humaray 2no poton ka roka jo ho (he came to viren nd virat nd put hz 1 arm around viren nd da other around virat) par nachay ga kaun... Kadambari: baujii devar ka roka hai toh nachnay ka pehla haq bhabi ka hona chai ku jeevika apni behn keliye nacho gi na?.. Jeevika: ji main?? Par main... Dadaji: par var kuj ni jao jeevika aur shuruh hojao (jeevika went infront of every1 nd lukng down "main kia karo kis ganay pay nachon" dn a song hit her.. Here viren wz tense bcz he thought wt wud jeevika do) virat to viren: bhai sambhalo dnt get faint... Viren to virat: bhai chup kr meri aur band na baja... Manvi: yeh mogambo mujy nachnay ko keh daita eb dii kia karein gi (virman nd viren lukd at eachodr tense just dn da music start nd dy lukd at front virman viren shocked) (jeevika singing nd dancing) jeevika: lo chali main... Lo chali main apnay devar ki barat lay kay lo chali main (she went to virat nd took hz hand nd make him stand behind her) na band baja na hi barati khushiyo ki saugat lay ky lo chali main... ( manviz mouth wz open bt viren smiled "wow u dance reall well") jeevika: devar dulha bana.. (she imitates ov a sehra on viratz head) sar pay sehra saja, bhabi bankay aj baliya laiti hai... (dn she went to manvi grabbed her hand nd took her to da centre nd make her stand near virat just inches away) prem ki galian khilay pal pal khushi milein (she hugged manvi) sachay maan say aj duaein daiti hai.. (dn she went to viren nd stand wid him actng her self as a hoarse) ghoray pay char kay chala haan banka apni dulhan ko milnay lo chali main... (dn manvi cudnt control she grabbed virats hand nd went infront ov virika) virman: waha waha raam ji hmmm jodi kia bnai... Hmmm jiju aur di di ko hmmm badhai ho badhai (dn virman grabbed virika nd took dm in centre nd danced virika were lukng at eachodr while dancing so wz virman nd smilng all were enjoyn) pinki nd kadambari: sb rasmo say bni ha jag main dil say dil ki sagai... Jeevika again: kal tak ti ma naii aj bani ma bari kal tak ghar ki bahu ti aj hn jaithani.. (she showed manvi fake anger nd jerked her) hukum chalao gi main, ankh dikhao gi main sehmi khari rahay gi meri devrani hazr sapnay palko main apni dewani lay kay chali lo chali main ( all were dancing enjoyn virika virman wz just lukng at eachodr) virika: tu hi tu hai tu hi tu hai jeenay ki wja... Virman:hua kia hua kia hua... (jeevika: viren ji ap sachmain bht achay hn... Viren:jeevika dnt wri main hmesha tmay aur mannu ko khush rakho ga.. Virat: yeh kia ho raha hai par jo b hai acha hai mannu sach aek nai hawa ki taran meri dunia main ai hai.. Manvi: manvi tu us chep ko yun dekhna band kar warna kahi meri ankho say meri dil ki beatz na dikh jaein par thankyew bhagvan ji 4 keeping me nd ma dii togeather nd happy nd givng jiju nd chep yeh kia horaha ha mujy) "when destiny play cardz love enterz lyf dt wz da case wid vaderaz nd virika nd virman " (the end so enjoy guyz nd do comment too luv ya all next update in da morng) precap: karwa chauth nd virika virman first mid nyt walk... <3 yush here 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome. .waiting 4 karwa chauth
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wow both of da updates r beautiful