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Ff ehmmbh : life as we knw it first ov all a little bit intro abt me nd ma story... I just thought it nd em rytng it.. Em a big tym fan of virman dy r superb.. Ma story surly revolve around virman nd virika as virika will be supportng charcters... It will will be a family story jzt lyk da show will have similarties as well as differences... Sm scenes may b alike da show.. Ill used mixed languages nd 1 thng em a slow poster so if u wanted da parts soon cmnt guys inbox me make me remind as i visit forums daily... Oky so abt me its yush u all cn call me yush... Criticism too will be accepted but a little... Characters are da same if new added will be told later in da story... Nd dre z no cancer track in ma story till nw agay jakay i dnt knw...oky so its abt it all till nw em giving a chapter 1... So read it lyk ma work nd comment it too plz only dn i wud ryt more...:) ⭐️ CHAPTER 1 its wz da morng da sun wz on its peek , da birds were chirping every where dre wz freshness it wz da soothng place rhshikesh... Dre wz a house shown wid name plate chaudarys... A big black car stopped infront of da chaudarys gate nd da mirror went down showng a classy women sitting on da back seat wid a middle aged man wid sm documents in da hand .. Da women looked towards da house (serious music was playnd in background) the man: swamini jee hum phnch chukay hn yehi hai chaudaryz ka ghar... ( yes it waz no 1 else but swamini singh vadera) swamini: hum dekh saktay hn sharma jee, waisay hum apko bta daein yeh log bilkul b humaray standardz ky hisab ky ni hn as u knw vaderaz judgo aur vakeelo ka khandan ha humara but jb baat humaray bhanjo ki ati hai it shud be da best spcly jb baat humaray bhanjay viren ki ati hai... sharma: jee jee swamini jee hum jantay hn apka rutba apki izat sb but ap yakeen maniye viren betay kelye jeevika beti say achi larki (he wz cut by swamini again) swamini: woi toh jeevika wo pehli larki hai jo humein apnay viren kelye pehli nazar ma pasand agai halankay viren ny abi tk jeevika ko deka ni hai phr b usnay sb humpay chora hai agr humay larki pasand agai toh yeh rishta paka samjhiye aur tbi humnay inkay financial status pay dehan ni dia.. Sharma : jee bilkul jaisay ky apko is parivar ky baray ma sb pata hai par jeevika beti ky baray ma aek baat jeevika beti ki jaan basti ha unki choti behn manvi baby ma... Swamini: hum yeh baat pichlay 6 ghantay sy suntay arahay hn waisay achi baat ha sagi behnein ha pyar toh hoga hi na... Khair ab andar chaltay hn... (scene moved inside da house where every1 wz movng here nd dre dng work sm1 wz arangng thngz sm1 wz callng sm1 wz gng to da kitchen it wz hustle bustle around until da door bell ring) a boy in teen stopped nd lookd towards da old lady... Boy: beeji lagta hai wo abhi gaye.. Beeji: haye rabba itni jaldi ja dabbu darwaza khol aur pinky (she shouted) sb kuj tyar rakhna ai smjh... Aur madan tu b jakay swagat kar.. Madan:jee beeji... (dn an much older laday to beeji who wz sitting on da sofa said) b.beeji: tyarian toh deko jaisay pata ni kaun araha ha.. Beeji: badi beeji chup ab ap shant rai... (until nw dabbu nd madan came to da living room wid swamini nd sharma) beeji greeted swamini wid a smile nd made dm sit nd dn pinky came wid eatable nd dre wz mehman nawazi gng on until swamini spoke... swamini: beeji apki mehman nawazi ka bht bht shukriya par hum seedha muday pay atay hn.. (beeji lukd at swamini confused) ap toh janti hn na humaray khandan ky baray ma phr b hum yahan apki poti jeevika ka hath mangnay aye hn humaray bhanjay viren kelye... b4 beeji cud say anythng pinky jumped in ... Pinky: hayee swamini jee apnay toh pehli ball pay bold kardia all wicked down (swamini faked a smile nd beeji lukd at pinki angry whch made her quite) beeji: jee swamini jee hum jantay hn aur yakeen maniye hum bht khush hn bin maa baap ki bachi ha hum apki hasiyat ky mutabik b ni phr b apnay humari beeti ka hath manga bht khushi ki baat hai aur humein koi aitraz b ni hai... Swamini: aur jeevika ko... Beeji: jo humara faisla woi uska faisla hai... Swamini : dtz gud waisay hum aek bar jeevika sy personally milna chahtay hn wo ha kahan.. Aek bar hum mil laein phr thoray din tk viren ko b laein gay takay wo dono b mil laein... Pinki: jeevika wo toh ghat pay ha manvi kay sth.. (beeji stared at pinki) swamini: phr humay ghat pay jana chai (she stood up)beeji: par jeevika ko toh pata b ni ha (b4 she cud complete swamini said) swamini: tbi it will be gud hum b toh dekhein jiski itni tareef suni hai wo aam tor pay karti kia ha lets go (swamini walked out wid sharma nd madan wid dabbu , beeji turned towards pinki) beeji: tu pagal hogai ha kia zarorat ti yeh btanay ki ky wo ghat pay ha tu janti ha na manvi b ha wahan par pata ni kia udham machaya hoga waha pay manvi ny eb swamini jee ko kuj bura lag gaya toh? Hai rabba madad eb chal ... (dy went too) b.beeji: eb maza aye ga churail pata ni kia dhamakay kar rai hogi..) AT GANGA GHAT jeevika wz takng round ov tulsi pauda nd prayng wen swamini wid everybody came.. Swamini lukd at jeevika beauty nd smiled thnkng dt her choice is awsom 4 viren nd beeji wz happy nd nervous to happy dt jeevika wz nt playng or foolng around wid manvi but nervous dt where wz manvi .. Beeji to herself : hai rabba aj manvi koi garbar na karay... Jeevika opened her eyes nd saw every1 nd came to dm... Jeevika: beeji, chachi chachu dabbu ap sb yahan? Beeji: jeevika insay milo yeh hain swamini jee jinkay baray ma raat ko btaya tha.. (jeevika lukd down nd bowd down nd took blessings) swamini: god bless you beta (swamini wz very happy as jeevika wz ideal patner 4 viren) pinki: hayee meri bachi jeevika manvi kaha hai.. (beeji glared again as to y pinki took da tufan name) Par jb destiny ny kuj dhamakay dar plan kia ho toh sb kuj line pay chalta ha... (jeevika lukd here nd dre) jeevika: chachi wo mannu abi yahan ti pata ni aray wo rai (she signaled towards da ghat in water sm gal wz prayng lukng at sky nd as she turned swamini stared at her as thinking smthng a smile crept her face nd she signaled sharma to come to the corner every1 wz bz thnkng wt swamini tawkng nd manvi wz still in water swamini came) sharma: swamini jee ko rishta manzor hai jeevika beti aur viren betay ka..(evry1 smiled nd jeevika lukd down) par (every1 lukd at sharma jee to wat next he want to say) (but swamini continued) swamini: par beeji baat yeh hai ky viren ka b aek chota bhai hai virat wo b lawyer hi hai beeji humein apkay sanskaar cho gaye apki potian bht pyari aur sanskari hn isilye hum chahtay hn ky jeevika aur viren ky sath sath ap apni poti manvi ka b hath humaray chotay bhanjay virat kelye daein daein... (every1 shockd) pinki: hayeee aek ball pay 2 cheekay... Beeji: par swamini jee manvi toh nadan hai... Swamini: shadi kay bad sb ladkian smjhdar hojati hn... Aur jistaran jeevika viren kelye sai hai i knw manvi b virat kelye tek hogi... (beeji to herself: shadi toh manvi ki b karni ha ku na isi khandan ma aur phr jeevika b toh hogi dono behnein aek sath par manvi uff ni jeevika smjhdar ha wo sambhal lay gi) beeji: mujy koi aitraz ni hai (swamini became to happy) swamini: toh phr tek hai dono shdian aek sath hongi hum apko phone karkay bta daein gay ky hum viren virat ko kb la rahay hn eb hum chaltay hn.. Nd ya beeji ap humari honay wali bahu ko kahiye ky bahar nikal aye warna sardi lag jaye gi.. (swamini left while smilng) beeji: aj hum bht khush hn teri aur manvi ki shadi... Uff chal madan .. Jeevika: khush toh ma b hn par mannu... ( every1 lukd to mannu ) the end... pRECAP: manvi acceptng da marriage after alot behas nd virika virman first meetng... Leave lykz nd cmntz dn ill continue
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