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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ff do pm me when you will cont
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally update !!!!
Please do show more of sam riga masti and thr other liling at them :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
yr ff is really very nice
iread it in one go its owsom
plz continue soon and 
plzzz pm me when update

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WOW! I just read the whole thing from start to finish! It's so good! There are so many characters to know...not sure if I can keep them all straight yet! :) but I'm so glad I found your story! Can't wait to read more on how Arjun finally proposes to Riya and how her family reacts!
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hey update next part
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CHAPTER 22
 
 
 
 
 
Within a hours Samrat , Shaurya get along well wit ETF Team .. Like bichade hue yaar mil gaye. Here Choti Maa felt proud on her Sameer whn she knows abt him all , hw he solve cases , hw he handle ppl , Choti Maa's eyes fill wit tears whn she know Sammer nearly escaped frm death in 3 cases. She hold his hand & ask him
 
 
 
 
 
Choti Maa : Beta ye sab karna jaruri hai ? Hamara matlab hai yaha tumhare apne log hai , apni ek duniya hai , aaj tumhare paas paison ki koi kami nahi , sab kuch hai yaha , To , to phir kyu apni jaan ko is tarah se tum zokhim (risk ) mai dal rahe ho? Ye sab chod do & vapis aa jaao yaha..
 
 
 
Sameer : (Takes a deep breath ) Choti Maa hum samaz sakte hai aap ki bhavna yonko ( feelings ) aur aadar bhi karte hai aapki baat ka. Lekin ye sab unka hai mera nahi . Aur mai aise logo ke saath nahi reh sakta jo hathyare hai , jinhe sirf apni shan , shukat , kul aur parmpara ke aage aur kuch nahi dikhta . Vaha mai jo bhi hue apne kaam se hue , kam se kam log mujhe ek hathyare ka beta to nahi kehete, apni behen ko khush rak sakta hue , use ek healthy atmosphere de paa raha hue , yahi mere liye kaafi hai.
 
 
 
 
Choti Maa : Vo to sab thik hai beta , par mere Sameer ka kya ? Mujhe mera vo hasta khilkhilta hue Sameer vapis chayie. Tumne sab ko khush rahkha par apni khushi ka kya beta , apni zindagi ka kya , kya isi tarah ghut ghut kar jyoyege tum ? Hum ye nahi dekh sakte , hum khud Bade Bhaisa (Rathod's father ) se baat karenge .
 
 
 
 
Sammer : Nahi aap unse koyi baat nahi karnegi is bare mai ...
 
 
 
 
Choti Maa : Par beta..
 
 
 
Sameer : (Cuts her in mid-way ) Apko hamari kasam .. (& goes frm thr)
 
 
 
 
Sameer Rathore just wips his tears & walk towards the  His Mother's room  bt stop suddenely , whn he founds Shaurya standing thr & open her room. Rathore goes near to him . Sharya already open d lock & goes inside room. As soon as Rathore enter her room he feel her frangnce still thr. Shurya just look @ room all furniture keep clean. All her belongings like her comb , jewellery box etc. all things placed thr opproriate place , like she still cme & use ths all . Rathore eyes fell wit tears. Shurya started to cry madly. Rathore goes near to him & placed his hand on Shurya's shoulder. Shuarys lift his his gaze & found Rathore in front of him. He hugs Rathore & sobbing.
 
 
 
 
Rathore : (Try to control himself bt finally burst into crying.)
 
 
 
Shurya : Bhai sa , agar aaj vo zinda hoti to baat kuch aur hi hti na , hamesha sab ka khyal rakhna , sab ke bare mai sochna , unhe sabki pasand napasand yaad thi , vo kabhi kabhi kisi ka janmdin nahi bhulti thi.
 
 
 
Rathore : Ha . vo hum sab ke liye sab kuch thi , ek badi behen se jayda vo maa thi hamari  ( &  Rathore look @ her big portait )
 
 Drashti Dhami (133764) size:1280x800
 
 ( Rathore's big Di )  (Suhani Rathod)
 
 
Rathore feels tht she still smiling on him. Rathore rembered tht incident whn Thy attened weding of his Di's best frnd.
 
Sameer : Di ham ghar kab jaaenge (Eating  his fav Samosa)
 
Suhani : Kyu , kya hua ?
 
Sameer :Di mai bore ho gya hue , chaliye na, plz.
 
Suhani : Are abhi tak shadi ki rasme bhi nahi hoi , aur aise kaise jaaye?
 
Sameer : Di... (irritatdly call her)
 
Suhani : Acha baba ruko , mai dekhti hue ki vidhi shru hone mai kitna time aur hai ? Aur Chutki kaha hai?
 
Sameer : ( ponited his fingers towards ice-cream stall)
 
Suhani : Ha mai to bhul gyi thi  , ki memsaab aur kaha jaa sakti hai (She murmed to herself & goes to ice-cream stall) (She found one little girl who is abt to 6 yrs old eating ice-cream happily  , her mouth filled wit ice-cream) (Suhani smiled to herself & goes to near her. )
 
Riya : Di ... aap
 
Suhani : Ha mai (Started clean her face wit tissue)
 
Riya : Di , aap ko pta hai , inke yaha khane mai , Sitaphal ki Rabdi hai .
 
Suhani : (Wit fake anger) Tumhe kaise pta , abhi tak khana bhi nahi laga.
 
Riya : Vo maine Papa ka naam leker pucha to use uncle ne bata diya. (She said innocenctly)
 
Suhani : Sona aise nahi karte.. Chalo yaha se aur Sameer ke saath hi rehena kahi mat jana , mai abhi aati hue. ( She vanished in crowed)
 
Weding starts Suhani enjys weding , while Sameer & Riya gets boring . Suhani notices ths & take thm to food stall. bcoz food stall already started to serve. She filled filled two plated wit food.
 
 
 
Sameer : Di sirf do plate...
 
 
 
Suhani : Ha . ek mere liye aur ek tum dono ke liye..
 
 
 
Sameer : Nahi Di. mai iske saath nahi khaunga , ye sirf iski manpasand chhezon khati hai aur baki mere liye chod deti hai.
 
 
 
Suhani : (Smiles @ her little brother. ) Sameer aisa nahi kehete , vo tumhari choti behen  hai na.
 
 
 
Sameer : Choti , Di ye 6 saal ki hai pure 6 saal ki..(Look angrily @ Riya who already started enjy her food.)
 
 
 
Suhani : (Ruffles his hair ) Acha baba tumhe jo bhi chayie tum mere plates se le lena ab khush..?
 
 
 
Sameer : Di plz mere baal mat bigadiye na..
 
 
 
Suhani : Acha baba thik hai , nahi haath lagaungi tumhare khbsurat baalon ko..
 
 
 
After food Sameer wondering in weding hall. Suddenely he heard big noise, He look back & found all ladies crying , including his Di.. Sameer dn't like tears in his Di's eyes & goes to her & starrted dragging to her.
 
 
 
Suhani : (Go wit him in one corner ) Kya hua Sameer  , kuch chayie tha?
 
 
 
Sameer : Di , aapko kisine kuch kaha ?
 
 
 
Suhani :Nahi to ...
 
 
 
Riya : ( Holding her frock )  To aap ro kyu rahi hai? ( she ask innocently)
 
 
 
Suhani : (Smiles @ her siblings question) Isiliye ki hamari dost hame chod kar jaa rahi hai , apne ghar..
 
 
 
Sameer : Apne ghar ??? To ye kisa ghar tha.. ???
 
 
 
Suhani : Are mere buddhu ram , ye bhi uska hi ghar tha , par shadi ke baad ladki ka ghar badal jaata hai , us apne pati ke saath jana padta hai.
 
 
 
Riya : App to nahi jaayngi na hame chodkar?
 
 
 
 
Suhani : (Bents down lillte to match-up Riya's height ) Ha hame bhi jana hoga , ek din tum bhi chali jaayogi meri laado..
 
 
 
Sameer : (In deep thinking )
 
 
 
Suhani : Kya hua ? kya soch rahe ho ?
 
 
 
Sameer : Yahi ki hamari jane ke baad , Masa & Babasa khyal kon rakhga?
 
 
 
Suhani : (Look @ him questionalingly ) Kyu tum kaha jaa rahe ho ?
 
 
 
Sameer : Mai bhi to apne pati ke ghar chala jaaunga na , shadi ke baad ... ( He ans innocently )
 
 
 
Suhani : (laugh @ his brother ans )
 
 
 
Sameer & Riya : Di , aap has kyu rahe ho ?
 
 
 
Suhani : Vo isiliye ki tum apne pati ke ghar nahi jaaoge , apni patni ko ghar leker aaoge.. Vo yaha hamare saath hamare ghar mai rehengi.
 
 
 
 
Sameer : Acha ... To aap aur Riya kyu jaayegi? aap bhi mere saath rahiye na . mai hamshe aap ka saath dunga.. kisi na aap ko tung kiya na to mai uski haddi pasali ek kar dunga.. (he said aggresivley)
 
 
 
Suhani : Nahi Sameer. aisi baate nahi karte , hamne tumhe kitni baar kaha hai..
 
 
 
Sameer : Sry Di.
 
 
 
Riya : Sry Di.
 
 
 
Suhani : Are aapne kyu sry bola ?
 
 
 
Riya : Vo bhai sa ne bola na.. (Riya always copies her brother)
 
 
 
Suhani : Acha thik hai..
 
 
 
Suddenely one person comes thr & inform thm tht thy should go now , bcoz Maharani called several times for thm.
 
 
 
Suhani : ( Nodded to tht person ) Kaka ab jakar gadi nikaliye , hame aate hai.
 
 
 
 
Suhani : (Turn towards Sameer ) Sameer tum hamesha hamare saath rehoge na ?
 
 
 
 
Sameer : Ha Di.. I promise u.
 
 
 
 
Sameer Rathore thinks he cn't keep his promise, Everything is changed tod , if he not gng to meet his frnds tht day . He feels tht somone stare on thm & sees Samrat also standing thr wit teary eyes.
 
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow yaar
rathod is so emotional
i loved the part
send me pm when u wil update next part
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Samrat goes to thm & abt to speak thn suddenely thy hear someone's voice.. Thy all wips thr tears & locked room , goes direction towards d voice.
 
 "Dhan na dhan na dan na
 
Dhan dhan na tannna taan naaa naaa naaa... "
 
(Thy see Riya standing on staris & sings a song )
 
 
(jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe - (2)bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe (Wit tht she goes to Rathod)kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree) - (2)
(She hold his shoulders frm behind  & lookk @ his face frm right to left)
jhula jhula...
jhula, jhula jhula

(too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai) - (2)
( Riya dancing thr & Shraurya sings to her )  

mai shor sharaba dhum karungee, thumak thumak nachungee
 (Riya dancing childshily )
chanchal koyal ke jaise mai toh chahek chahek jaungee
( Riya gng here & there )
sare rang dhanak ke mai chura lungee - (2)
ho o tare palak ke tod laungee...
(She said to her three brothers)  
chup chup ke meree hansee naa udana
(She stole d glance @ Arjun who smiling @ her )
 jhula baho kaa aaj bhee, jhula jhula, jhula jhula...
jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya god me uthao naa aaj mujhe
kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree
(She hold Samrat cheecks & pull thm playfully. )
jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
(Riya sings again )  
too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai...
(Samrat sings for her )
 ek nahee, do nahee, tin hain bhai, tino jaise mere sipahee
( Riya goes around towards thm , & dancing circling around thm )
meree shararat meree tabahee bacha le khuda
lekin inka gussa aisa, gad gad gadje badal jaisa
( Riya waves her hand to show sky falling )
phir barsaye pyar bhee vaisa, o mere khuda
(Riya nw shows like raining )
motee hu mai inn aankho kaa
(Riya goes to Rathod & turn around to face him )  

phul hu inke bag kaa
(Nw she goes to Shaurya & Samrat )  
jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe
kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree
(Rathod hold her frm her Arms , while Shaurya hold her frm waist & Samrat hold her legs
& thy give her zhula)  jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe
(too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai) - (2)
(Nw all three proudly brothers sings )
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG di thank you so much for updating it,I was so waiting for it ๐Ÿ˜Š
whats happen to Suhaani?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ waiting eagerly..
the last song of riya & his brothers was so adorable ๐Ÿ˜ณ
waiting for Ariya & Meera-Rathod moment..great update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ & thanks once again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful and thank for such a long update
loved the way they remembered the past
n geet as their elder sister๐Ÿ˜ณ
n finally loved the romance between meera and Rathore
and whats more, Meera has finally been accepted๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by haruhi26 - 11 years ago