SwaRon OS: Having you by my side - Page 2

That was a beautiful OS !! I loved the part where you used the baby pink flower to symbolise the lost baby !! That really touched my heart !! It was sweet how both Sharon and Swayam tried to comfort each other despite being in pain themselves !! And I'm happy that in the end, they got what they wanted and still had each other by their side, closer than ever !!

awesome os rutu 😊 beautifully penned down 👍🏼

Beautiful concept Rutu. Really beautiful. 

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 11 years ago

Sometime you come across works after reading which at once one doesn't have anyword to describe what they are feeling at the moment. They are simply too awestruck by the beauty of the piece to say anything else. This is one such work. I don't know what to say about this magnificient work of yours. Just too good.

First of all just loved the plot of this OS. It was really heart touching. And the way you expressed the pain of Sharon and Swayam was just moving. Their effort to face the hardship the life has forced on them, the pain, the love everything was just amazingly done. And little metaphores like the flower one was aptly used. I just loved the precison with which you have gone through this OS. Pain may be the theme of this OS but its end speaks about life in a grand manner. The end was really good.

This is sooo cute. 

rutu i loved it gal..👏.it had pain,love n  happiness..n every other related emotions blended beautifully.👍🏼.every bit of the os was so heart touchin..❤️aww swaron baby..m soo waitin fr it😳n loved swayam's idea of makin a footloose team😆

Rutu This was immensely beautiful OS...

Res :)
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Rutu it was amazingly beautiful! 👏
I loved the concept! ❤️

The park and the bench scene was especially the best and my favourite part! 😳Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

Rutu this was so pure...a tragedy of this enormity culd hav done only two things to them, either drifted them apart or strengthened the bond, thank u for not making them indulge in a blame game... coz that wuld hav only hurted more both of them...beautifully mature the way u showed how Swayam enveloped her with the strength of his luv and did not let her wallow in depression and brought her bac to life...at the same time, also liked how u showed Sharon rallying around to respond to his efforts and thinking abt them in unison and not luking at this as a personal loss - finally their mutual faith in the luv of the other brought them the joy they deserved - the reference to the footloose team lightened the mood at each juncture it was used. There was a  a serene harmony of nature with their psychological state at the different stages of the OS...

Simply loved the OS !!! It was beautiful... 😉