SwaRon OS: Having you by my side - Page 4

Beutifully written...perfect mixture of feelings...culd feel sharons pain when she lost her first child...the irony about the flower was very well written...loved swayams idea of footloose team...n ending was perfect.

Edited, FINALLY 😆 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64911713

wow..what a beautiful OS👏...really loved it😊

 

beautifully written,awesome OS

dis is awesome Rutu!!u wrote it so beautifully dat i cud really read the pain they are goin through!loved the fact dat swayam stood beside her all the while..no matter what he didnt lose hopes,sharon re-living the pain for the loss was best describes,the trauma dey passed through still swayam hid his grief to make her alright was just amazing..n dey found happiness again!
Dis is totally one of the best pieces I have ever read on swaRon!!

sorry.. wrong post Edited by ---Priya--- - 11 years ago

amazing OS...the love swaron have for each other is depicted so beautifully...so pure...so many emotions...they are each other support

Rutu awesome OS!!!👏