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Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Hey sweety itr awes0me os loved it especialy da beach scene:) do write m0re
Thanx Sarah...well i had written a lot more, but deleted it coz i was scared of posting it😊
Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Hey sweety itr awes0me os loved it especialy da beach scene:) do write m0re
Originally posted by: princess_T
OMG Vibha😲 This was so freaking brilliant😃 It was the best love confession ever!😃 I could feel emotion... There were butterflies in my stomach😆😳 I'm awestruck... I can't type anymore... Cuz this was so effortless!! Lovely...
Originally posted by: princessmomo
Di you are simply superb and very beautiful , amazing and cute OS. believe me i loved it
All the best Di you are a great writerPlzz update soon...👏
love it..really nice..i've always wanted to know what would have happened had uday not stopped manyata in time..you've fulfilled my wish..lol..
do send me a pm when you update plzzz...would love to read the next part...I bet uday stopped because he didnt want to do anything before marriage..lol
Originally posted by: mahi0809
Nice work Vibha!...
Very very good!👍🏼... Continue soon!
Originally posted by: pia.raha
ittss reallyy gr88!!!!!!!! cntinuee soon.aise point pe finish kiyaa,soo jaldi update kar do!!!!!!!!
Originally posted by: preya_radev
really loved it i mean it was much better than wt was shown in the show... i was actually going on reading and then i came across a line which said to be continued nooo y did u stop there really curious to know what happened. lol loved manyata punishment that she gave to uday and the chase was really awesome please update soon and thanks for the pm
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