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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: peepli
R..me again kavi.. 😆 I am such a creepy stalker 😆

Shal...I may be stalking your stalking 😆

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

EDITED.

This was also a mahaepisode Blockbuster Update Kavi.

Well done babe.🤗

Arhi got married dammit.

Maami is such a drama queen and I loved how ASR gave it back to her.

She really deserved to know her place in the house.

I like this Anjali, at least I hope she is less delusional than the one on the show.

Shyam is getting leching over Khushi, I cant wait to see what ASR does when he finds out.

At least this ASR of yours has brain cells on the active mode unlike our TV one.

This is getting better and better with each passing update.

Let's see how the story unfolds now.

Keep up the good work.

I farak this FF so much.

Edited by kookie2020 - 12 years ago

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

very beautiful update, cont soon. waiting to read

i love this storyline.

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annab

@annab

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Hi charlotte,,i must say u have written one hell of a story...my sister refer this story to me...and im loving every second of it...u have explained each and every detail of the story ...and i can picturise every part of rajasthan while reading the story...loved the characters...especially arnav with all his flows ...

U truly are an amazing writer👏👏..keep it up and continue soon...

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Res..
Will edit in the night...
***Edited****
First thing i am really happy about this part. So much that i was hoping it would never end.. 😃
So Khusi n Arnav are married now . I am really glad that Khusi found out the reason for Arnav's hasty mrg to her but again she's thinking so soon for a escape for Arnav from this one.
Seriously people like Khusi does ever exist ? who never pauses to think about themselves , not even once. She got mrd for her sister's sake and now planning for the future of Arnav on how to help him breaking this.
Loved the Arnav and Mami's scene.. Overdose of cough syrup 😆 Really Mami couldn't get anything..
I loved the way Arnav stopped Mami to say anything against Khusi. And his own way able to make her agree for Payash mrg also..
The way Anjali n Nani reacts to the whole mrg thing little surprised me .. I mean they didn't object even a little.
Why we have a dose of shyam here.. 😡 He really freaks me out. Thank God Khusi will be safe now with Arnav ...

Continue soon pls.. Don't worry i will stalk till you do 😆

Edited by shonagudia - 12 years ago

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: annab
Hi charlotte,,i must say u have written one hell of a story...my sister refer this story to me...and im loving every second of it...u have explained each and every detail of the story ...and i can picturise every part of rajasthan while reading the story...loved the characters...especially arnav with all his flows ...
U truly are an amazing writer👏👏..keep it up and continue soon...

Thanks Anna!

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Kavi, Thanx for updating fast. On Wednesday rather than Thursday!
That was ME of sort. So much happened.
Will read again and comment later.

I am glad that Shyam will not be able to take liberties with khushi now.

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

extremely well written update... I love this story... its written almost as if by a professional author. Superb. Awaiting some amazing moments now that both are married. You have already set the path for the next plot when she plans to leave him after payal's marriage...