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Originally posted by: mistyrains
La la la ;)
Shall be back to edit soon :D---As much as I found that action unraveling her hair loose from the braid, ooze out raw sensuality,I wonder how Khushi puts up with the masochistic egoistic jerk. But hell, she's in love, so everything else gets overshadowed. And the way you have described the festival, the stalls, its mesmerizing, I could actually imagine every single scene in my mind. And then that pani-puri scene, you woman, are going to make me faint out of delirious happiness, right before my exams.Then the scene that followed where he talks about Lavanya, there was such a natural, beautiful flow of emotions between Arnav and Khushi. The love-making was sensual, exquisite. Now the next chapter has me worried about how Arnav will react, when not drowning in throes of passion with Khushi. Continue soon :)
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