A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection - Page 20

Unreserved my comment - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64694885

Hello Nidhi !!read the last two os today!i justcan say that you are a god gifted talent girl!!!l the way u wrote the foreplay was super amazing!it was written in the best possible way a person can write.the way u frame ur writings is really mindblowing!the last one was also the same..awesome work buddy...it's a treat to read your writings..i would like to place u as one of my most favourite writers here.this forum is blessed to have u dear...god bless...

Nidhi Thank you so much for a beautiful OS.Its so touching, and I really hope they meet again. I have no words to express the serenity of the OS, so pure and innocent, Well done nidhi def you are writer class apart.

Res!
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Sorry for un-reserving it so damn late! 

This OS was plain beautiful..there was a hidden innocence behind it..! Starting was very funny..the old lady staring at swayam! 😆
and then meeting with sharon was really nycc!
 the conversation revealed that she's blind..you showed it flawlessly! 👍🏼
It was really vry touchy! 😳

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

Thank u so much Nidhi for such an awesome os...it was very touchy n emotional...n the way u have written this, it had really made us connect to the characters really well..

I'm kinda speechless right now, don't really know how to explain it to u that how beautiful this particular os was...all I can really say is that, u never fail to amaze us with ur works n the amazing talent u have, so keep on showering us with such awesome work 😊

I hope this isn't the last os of this marathon...I don't mind waiting for u to update it whenever u have finished writing the update completely 😊

Dear

Nidhi what should i say about this... such a lovely OS.. 👏

This was the most emotionally rich of the series yet...yet coz I believe u r not done with it yet and we r willing to wait for the rest of em as long as it takes you...

I am speechless.
It ws hilarious reading swayum n his stalker's part :D :D n then *dhumm* i did NOT expect such a thing! Seriously!!..

I loved the way u have potarayd SHARON's character in dis OS!!..its so inspiring..she handles everythng on her own evn though of her difficulties..WOW!!.. And the part where she touches his face to remebr him i was like WOW again!

Coming to swayum well the way u have described the his shock state knowing about sharon was so well penned down,it felt so real. And i loved the ending :) :)

There's no doubt that you are a very remerkable writer n alwaz leave us,reders amazed.
I have read all your OS's but due to time issues not been able to cmmnt,sorry for that.
I loved the whole marathon n wud hate to say goodbye to it. Well take your your time n complete the other two OS's that if you could, we all don't mind waitng for it :) :).

At the end Thanykou for this OS marathon of SwaRon..will be waiting to read more from you :) :)

Amazing os nidhi !!fantastically written👏