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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#851

I came across your ff yesterday and what a brilliant writer you are. The characters, their emotions, their logic, the struggle between the mind and the heart, the description of the scenes from the humble house of khushi to the pool side are done brilliantly. You are absolutely a phenomenal writer. You have spent so much time on your ff which I appreciate to no ends.

I loved the dragon fly the term of endearment that arnav has for khushi.

OK course loved the peal ring and arnav's rational for it.

Loved each and every scene between them.

I also loved how their relationship is progressing. Khushi took a long time, as required I think, to disclose her love for him in words. You did make us wait, but the wait was so worth it.

I hope that you will have time to continue your great work and take us all for a wonderful ride.

Waiting for the story to continue.

Thank you.

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lalpeeli

@lalpeeli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

waiting for both cul de sac and this story

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sabreenxz

@angelsabreenxz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

just an awesomestory:)))))))))) great yaar:))))))) 👏

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xyzw231

@xyzw231

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Amazing FF. So glad I came across it. You have a way with words.

Hopefully you will update the story.

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Maleina34

@Maleina34

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

This story is so amazing. I hope you continue it. The way you write about the psyche of the different characters make them feel alive. Kushi journey to forgiveness is so real and relatable. I hope we can read from you soon

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Waiting for the next update..

Please do continue soon..!!

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Oh my god!!! Absolutely out of the world story this is!

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

I am in total awe of the way u weave words into a sentence and then a intricate paragraph and then in to an intensely woven chapter!! I still am processing all that I have read in this story which is mind blowing by the way, the sheer breaking down of every single detail of which the heart ,the mind , the body and the soul feel ,react ,think and act...I am absolutely in love with the way Arnav and Khushi get emotionally,psychologically,physically ,mentally involved ,attracted , combined ,figured and finally accepted each other,irrevocably ...

Your writing is so profound and clear at the same time..along with being soul stirring...have never ever read anything so well dissected and thought out to the tiniest detail of

F their thought process.

The writers of ipk should have seen your work and took a few scenes:) would have loved to see your story in the series..especially the remorse and redemption part.. It's that good:)

Please do continue this and I feel u r made to write!! I congratulate you for this absolutely beautiful work and wish u all the best!

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933191

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

I totally love this FF and you know what's the best part the concentration is always on Arshi and I really loved Khushi's confession and their late night phone convo was great too...Khushi exercising her right and Arnav being happy about it!!! I can't believe she compared him to jalebi!!! I also like the fact that Khushi took her own time before forgiving Arnav...It was really nice to read how Arnav's redemption and Khushi's forgiveness evolved at its own pace.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Wonderful chapters.. Arnav just cudnt believe that she confessed she loves him.. And then she telling him how she will always stand with him in everything.. Just so heart warming...