Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] - Page 3

Congrats on your new thread! Loved the pictures of devaki!

Wat the hell ?? Wats happening ? Why the hell is kashi scared so much ? Wat does arnav gng into trnace mean ? N why should he leave the house ?
Derz so many why ? How ? Wat ? Gng in my mind !! Plzz. Ans dem soon !! Waiting for next update
N congo on new thread :D

read it once, still taking it in. gotta read again to delve deeper

oh boy! this was an intense update... land of dead???... sooo since he was on trance... did it mean something? he's next?! oh shoot

Originally posted by: ninand

I didnt think I would want to proceed any further from :

''She wondered if all women had foolish hearts that melted at such emotional drivel as a man trying to correctly pronounce their dead brother's name. ''

all the rains, and storm, and banana leaves and vines around the strangely sacred ritual, men and women loosing sense of what God must be .. and it has to be the upheaval inside him that decided that only what he didn't understand could numb him.

 there's aching tenderness in Kashi asking him to leave.. and an equally tender hope, that the man with all his vulnerabilities would be the one to bring the soul of the place to rest.

the cold brought about from the rains, the wetness, numbness and fear was so real.. i can almost breathe it in through my skin.

you write so well.

Spoken like a true romantic ;)
Edited by -Aarya- - 11 years ago

"Kalarikkal Illathu aanu vazhilla. " what does it mean ??

Her moment with the baby was poignant and touched the heart strings. Sums up how she imagines her future...devoid of such joys. Edited by citi - 11 years ago

Ok, that chapter sent the creepy crawlies over my skin.  He was definitely in a trance both during the ceremony and at home. different trances but still a trance.

Congrats on the new thread... 3rd thread, yay! And to think you planned to end this story in a few chapters only initially! The update was intriguing, to say the least. It's past midnight here, and I was reading such a mystical update, it's enthralling, really ... The way you described Arnav being out of his senses was unsettling... And Kashi's concern for him... Great update... And at the cost of me sounding like a moron, I have to ask, Devi chechy, what does "Kalarikkal Illathu aanu vazhilla" mean?

amazing update, how easily u manage to tk us to a completly diff land and i cud visualise each scene unfolding in frnt of me.