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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Awesome update!

Loved it!

It was soo cute and adorable!

Haha, Arjun and Rathore were pulling Shree's leg! Awesome!

Continue asap and please include a lot of Ariya romance! ^_^

Thankf for the pm

pm me

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Uff finaly everything is allright 😊 Seriously Arjun & Rathod are so bad actor. they end up with laughter!!! 😃

bechara shree. Arjun & Rathod ne kya class liya uska & he blarted out everything in innocent way 😛

love the happy ending of this part with everyone. Update soon simar 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

brilliant update :) loved it

loved rathore's reaction when arjun told him that the guy is shree

rathore worried for tanvi :) how cute

riya, shree and anu making dinner for arjun that too his favorite dishes so that he can accept shree :)

arjun invited tanvi and sameer for dinner as well :)

loved when shree said is there a back door through which i can run away 😆

loved the part where rathore asked arjun whether cooking his favorite food will make him accept shree..

the way arjun and rathore pulled shree's leg was awesome 🤣

loved shree's dialogue "Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!" 🤣

poor shree he was so scared of them that he blurted out everything 😆

arjun and sameer accusing each other on whom started to laugh first

chotu and shree's conversation was so cute :)

chotu with neelima :)

finally shree is the part of the family :)

thanks for the PM :)

continue soon

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537088

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

sorry for late comment

it was amazing

i like the convoy of rathod and arjun at sameer's home and i like the sameer's concern for tanvi so much

and arjun teasing rathod and after that rathod told that "Tu rukh, jab Riya bhi..." and after read this line i am happy that they both friend's are now full on masti mood with serious mood

i like the way arjun made the full drama at riya's house and then they all laugh

i like the dialog of shree "Kya Shree?? Socha tha Arjun sir ko kaise bhi manaalonga, par Rathore sir? Maar denge yaar woh tho!!"

and then riya 's dilog is super cool vo tho phele sochna tha na

and they both shree ko cooking karva rahi he abhi se na jane bad me kya hoga shree ka bichara shree sabhi aur se fas gaya hai

i like the dialog of riya that "Apna nautanki bass kar aur khana bana!!"

i like the convey of rathod shree and arjun so much it's too good and you pen down it beautifully

i like the shree's mind voice you written it beautifully

"Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!"

and then they both do not listen and gave a chance to speak shree something they both are playing with shree very happily

and then shree made his way and speak every thing in all in one go and then asked for permission to arjun and rathod

and after all this happens they both laugh and gave the permission to shree and anu

and ypii now shree is a family member

and the convoy of chotu and shree are too good

pls update soon and tnx for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

awesome update
omg i can't belive i missed chapter23 i confuessed after reading chap 24
part23
finaly shree nd anu both confesed they love each other
loved shree 's expression on knwing everyone knws about anu loves excep him
part24
sameer nd arjun convo was amazing
sam taanvi scenes was cute
loved how arjun nd sameer pulled shree's leg
loved the way how shree told arjun nd sam about him anu
choru nd shree convo was nice
aww chotu nd neelima
continue soon
can't wait for the next partEdited by yas23 - 11 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

finially i have read all the updates

loved the updates

well written

wounderful update and

continue soon

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Hey Simar..

I've had a grin plastered on my face from the start to the very last word.. This one was a damn cute one.. The cuteness quotient is slowly increasing with every update..

Shree.. Shree.. My poor baby.. Itni Taang Khichayi? 😆 😆 Ab dono sarphire ACP's ki behen ke chakkar mein pad gaya toh kya kehna.. 😆😉 This was bound to happen..

I loved the way Rawte-Rathore both accepted him as a partner for Anu, while at the same time reminding him that his teeth would be knocked out if he made her cry.. 😉😆

Awwiie.. Picture perfect family! Loved them.. 😊

P.S.: Can we have a cute scene between Arjun-Riya in the upcoming Parts.. where Arjun pretends to be angry with Riya for not having told him.. And Riya trying to make it up to him.. 😉😆😛

Only if that's possible..

Also, please reveal more on the stalker.. That bit is still under wraps which sounds scary!

Thanks for the PM, dear.. 😊

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#579

[/QUOTE] sshhhrreee,,,,,,ooww..poor guy...bechare ko almost maar dala tha arjun n rathod ne...👏 sahi h...br👏other's love!!!⭐️

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Aukview

@Aukview

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: tani23
Sorry Simar...kaan pakad kar sorry ...i seriously didnt knew ki u will make 1 more res

mujhe first aana tha😆

😆 kaan pakad ne ki zaroorath nahi hain!! It's all good...no worries! 😉 I love the enthu with which you are commenting!! Thanks heaps for that!!! I always look forward to reading what you thought of the updates!!

Now coming to chapter

i seriously loved both d parts..

Rathore worried for tanvi n arjun smiling nteasing him...hehehe.

Seriously loved d way dey planned things
At home, these 3 were making dinner for him ..so that he can accept shree in d family...
Arjun also playing along n calling rathore over dinner
n den finally d second part

i was ROFLing while reading shree's reaction..
bechara shree...waat laga di in dono ne uski
n his reaction..."anu please cum here"

n finally Sameer n Arjun couldn't control dere laughter
even i was laughing dat tym
excellent part

loved it
Finally shree is a part of d family ...
maze aa gaye ...

I am glad you liked both parts!!! After all the expectations for the Arjun-Shree-Rathore confrontation I was a bit nervous for this part! 😛 Thank you again for the lovely comment...

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