Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Sorry for commenting soo late!
Thanks for sucha long update!!
It was awesomee!! ππΌ
sharon blushing soo sweetly! π³
and the convo's between them was super adorablee! π
i really lykd that part wen sharon thought of announcing them as a couple and taani and rinni fainted...lol! ππ
The ending was lovely..their dance! π
Keep writing more! π
Cute... Sharon blushing hard ππΌ
And Swayam asking her for dance in such a cute manner...βΊοΈ
Awesome...βοΈ
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Originally posted by: amruTa_SWaRon
Hey it was so beautifuulll...π π€
So Romantic...so simple yet beautiful nothing overdone...π³N a perfect ending...SwaRon dancing on pehla nasha n swayam's cheesy lines just made it perfect...had tears in my eyes while read the end...its just so beautiful to see Swaron all happy...π³n pehla nasha is d perfect song for Swaron...π³Sumtimes i feel pehla nasha is just made for our Swaron...πI really hope CV's show us sumthng lyk dis..π€U've penned it beautifully...πKeep up d good work...πKeep writing on SwaRon n do pm me d next time wenever u vil wite on SwaRon...I hav sent u a buddy req do add me...πP.S: May i know ur good name...??
Originally posted by: honeyangel
An Awesome OS LOVED each and every part.. Specially the last part of dance π³ lovely β€οΈ
Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
i know i am very late...as i told u..i read!!π
deeps di!!
super awesome OS!!!
from the very title it made me attract towards it!!...
this OS was completely Swaron-ish with lots of awww's n super entertaining moments!!
the 1st part ..it was random but the random-ness did include the SwaRon-ness!!π³
oh!!gosh!HOW MANY TIMES did sharon blsuh!!
sometimes at the thought of HIM sometimes even listening his name sometimes her ringtone!!π³π
and girls doubting !!πn part 2 was amazing!!
i will start from the FLASHBACK!!π³
wooww it was super nice!
in the morning when he recieved sharon's call it reminded me of the monsoon special ka scene awww π³
Swayam: me tumhari dream dekh raha hu ..mat jagao na
awww π³and filled with lots of teasing by swayam! π
Sharon(smiling nervously ): hey girls...u know na ...how stupid these boys are...Rey and me ...we had a bet about a new dance form ...the winner can give a dare to the other one ...he won ... he gave dare to put some idiotic ring tone for Swayam on my phone...sooo
hahahahahahahah loved her reply πππ
gosh!!the girls ask so many questions!!!!!! π n doubt a lot!!especially simmi!!
the epic moment when simmi calls thru swayam's phone on sharon's!! π€£
and SwaRon confused n blushing...
everybody discussing...objecting the song π and then finally they confess about their relationship to the gang!! yipeee
Swayam: (slowly) I need ur exclusive time ...I want to have you all to myself (smiling)β€οΈ
awww π³
and then Sharon's punishment which lead to a beautiful SwaRon dance π³
and the way he asked her for a dance!!OMG!loved the description!
and they way you described the lyrics with the movements!!!β€οΈ
this OS WAS AGAIN COMPLETELY SwaRon-licious! π³great job di!!! KEEP WRITING!!
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