Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
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The moment i started reading your OS part two this was my reaction.You say it is long are you kidding, how can such a beautiful OS ever be long. The sad thing is you have decided to make this the last part, hope it would have another chapter. The best!!!! SwaRonβ€οΈ,End wala dance was really the best part, sharons blushing to swayams naughtiness was the supercool Loved it so so so much. Thanks so much deep plz plz starte writing a FF.
I loved the fact that it was so long !!! LOL on the gang teasing Sharon so much till SwaRon were forced to reveal that they are together !!! And the scene after that was so sweet with Swayam wanting to spend some alone time with Sharon !! SwaRon dancing to Pehla Nasha was definitely the perfect ending !!
Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome update
Girls teasing sharon n their mission swaron works
Swaron talking each other whole night aww loved the way gang asking questions n poor sharon victim of girls
Pehla nasha perfect song for perfect couple n the way swayam ask sharon for a dance was amazing
Such a sweet update, while reading this i had this sudden thought that when we will get to see at least 0.01% of the same on the show π³Sharon knows that Swayam can handle the situation if their bunch of friends get to know about their relationship. But Sharon's imagination was funny when the girls faint after hearing the same. The gang's way of letting Sharon confess their relationship was smartπ And her excuses as wellπ. The last bit was amazing, specially the mention of her small palm resting in his big ones, i loved itπ³ .
Originally posted by: chimpukli10
hey d end was really nice..i liked simmi's plan..d whole gang reacting to it..nd d way this OS ended in sharon's room..nd d end perfectly suits to the title..
Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
awsome update...the lines vch you gave wre too too good...
that i want to give all myself to you...aaye haye...its awsome...loved how majnu boy is giving the majnu lines...blushing sharon is uber cute...and the dance part is awsome...sharon forgetting that she is at her own house...hehehe...nice one ...do write more...
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