SS-For U I hurt my love <3 Epilogue UPD !!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaaay!! me first...!

sorry got a bit excited cuz i never got to cmmnt first in anybodyz FF or Os...😃
hehe...
okie so about the os...
Did i eva tell u that u r an amazing writer...!
i must say u have the potential!!😊
this OS is straight from the heart...
the anger, the hate, the betrayal are all merged into each other soo well...!

to write an emotional scene is very difficult as i told ya b4...but u write it wid such an ease and u potrayed it sooo well...that i didn't have wordz to praise...

its simply P.E.R.F.E.C.T like y jyo di...
luv u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice..
grt work..

cont ur work...
Edited by ambishika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG wow. That was FANTASTIC. I want to cry after reading that. You wrote it so well!! I LOVE how you described Arnav's emotions. And when he cries in Khushi's arms!! Aww...that was so cute!! This is fantastic!! Please continue soon! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved it 
it was perfect plzz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! This is exactly what I want to happen... Perfect!! Why don't you become a member of the scriptwriters ?... 

Please continue... I could totally imagine the whole thing like this... This is more sensible, emotional... It would be really boring if Snakewa slithered out without Arnav noticing... 🤢

I loved the kiss, Damn it! The way you described it! Not driven by desire but but sealing the bond of love and protection... 


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Posted: 11 years ago
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r
di i am afraid wen aisa sachi main hoga wat will arnav do ..i 😭 this really made me cry nd at d same tyme smile seeing d 2  lovey dovey cuples..aw
aww di dat was really gud i loved it
i seriously now hate
anji 😡 😡 illiterate irritating foolish selfish person 😡
luved it 👏
it was amazing
ur an amazing writer
luv u nd thnx for d dedication 🤗
luv u
Edited by harshitaluv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it  continue pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice . do pm me 2nd part plzzz