Th#1 ArHi SS: Destroyed*AWARDED* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
OMG !!!!

what a start !!!!!

am loving this...do continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
wow.! it was a thrilling..!!
loved reading it. super-duper excited for the next part.!
do continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zehra, hats off to ur creativity.. His story is really dark. It wonderful... Do update soon .. Any chances that khushi will be proven innocent?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
different yet interesting, can u pm me once u update the further updates. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Explosive beginning. The staccato language gives it a cinematic feel. Nicely placed flashback. Again, Strong visuals. The transfer of the bag of money in exchange for the daughter. Well done!

I'm looking forward to more--I love an anti-hero, and especially love Arnav when he's relentless and driven AND ultimately mistaken.
The line about loving something completely and destroying something completely was brilliant--his character in brief. 

Maya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Aaawww a new SS from u zehra - count me in for all ur works
Prologue and chap 1 seems to be very interesting
Completely diff from all ur other works
Excited for the next update

Thx for ur pm
Priya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
interestin Prologue..
n way 2 intrstin chptr1..:)
Arnav z i guess MUing Khushi wid Shyam..
though Shyam must b lustin..n Khushi nowhr wud set in Shyam's frame..
Arnav did bad 2 her n her family..
called off ol d connctions..:/
dts bad..
its SS,,so i hope its shrt..n evrything gets  sorted out quickly..:)
 
do pm me wen u update more...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›thnxxx😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Wow, awesome, so far very interesting and looks like it's going to be intense and in a different league, if he is suspecting his brother in law and khushi But khushi and the brother in law are not in any official relationship correct? They are engaged or anything, as her father is ready to get her married to him.

Poor girl it's like she had been sold off, clearly she will not know what hit her! Waiting to see how this progressed, what happens when she realises that she has to cut all ties with her parents and sisters, when she realises that he is marrying her for a reason and there is no place for emotions...well not unless he falls in love with her...

Love that you are trying a new concept...all the best and waiting to read more...thnks for the pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome post, thx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow...Very interesting beginning. Its quite different from what you used to write but I am loving it.

Typical ASR.So Arnav doesn't know Khushi? I wonder how his family are going to react? How is he going to behave with Khushi? Is Khushi really at fault?

I am sure its going to be an awesome story. All the best and keep rocking.

Thanks for the PM. Looking forward to part 2.
Edited by Venilla - 11 years ago