Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
My apologies for the delay. I have been 1) chugging along with my broken laptop, 2) not feeling very well mentally, which impacted 3) having difficulties trusting myself with my writing--which made it difficult to even review old chapters for posting. Thankfully the funk is broken, and I even spawned a new chapter. One I have come to like.
I shall return to respond to the lengthy comment. I meant to last time, but couldn't. Hopefully, the three new chapters posted on pg. 81 should make up for everything.Happy Wednesday,Kittya.
Rescued indeed
You wave a griping tale, images of despair, the poignant painful feelings gripped me from the first sentence , the depth of hurt of these two people is so hard to watch while the characters are trying to grasps the enormity of their loss.
A woman lost, tried to commit the unforgivable only to realize that she does not want to die after all , and that it was harder to let go, especially with the life growing inside her that she has forgotten for a second before coming back to her senses.
A man suffering terribly, having lost his better half is brought back to reality by saving a stranger and the desperation to save her child after the shock of his discovery wore off. He is trying to move on but its so hard yet realizing the toll it is taking on his family he start taking baby step with the pictures removal firs than the ashes. However there are still setback.
Still he was put on someone else path and Yash did everything he could to rescue and brought her to the hospital but she was not completely saved as her baby was in danger; she did kind of drown for a minute there. What a contrast between the warm memories from her in-law and that of her Prashant, then again it seems she already went thru a loss and reliving it. The images are mixing up.
As for Yash he is not faring any better, frozen, empty stomach and a wound he barely feeling in his state of mind. How to keep going now.
A really great tale and hope to read more soon. Sorry for not posting my feedback sooner but I just go so busy.
Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">My apologies for not updating in a while. I have been working my way through things on this end, including but not limited to dealing with burn out, having to travel for my Gran's funeral, and getting back into the swing of things at work. I shall try to post this weekend--multiple chapters like the last time since so many weekends were missed--once I have a chance to proof them, and edit them to my liking.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Take care,</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Kittya.</font>
Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
My apologies for not updating in a while. I have been working my way through things on this end, including but not limited to dealing with burn out, having to travel for my Gran's funeral, and getting back into the swing of things at work. I shall try to post this weekend--multiple chapters like the last time since so many weekends were missed--once I have a chance to proof them, and edit them to my liking.
Take care,Kittya.
Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
My apologies for not updating in a while. I have been working my way through things on this end, including but not limited to dealing with burn out, having to travel for my Gran's funeral, and getting back into the swing of things at work. I shall try to post this weekend--multiple chapters like the last time since so many weekends were missed--once I have a chance to proof them, and edit them to my liking.
Take care,Kittya.
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