A WORD OF THANKS- Farewell poem for 1st PH @Pg 148 - Page 38

Apologies for being late; just finished reading it. This was a lovely story, Reshma. 👏 😃 Your writing style is engaging and very comfortable to follow. All the duo interaction was shown very well; my favourite has to be that chocolate scene. Daya sir's attitude there brought a smile to my face. 😆 I do feel Abhijeet sir knows him well enough now to be certain that he won't forget his birthday and is cooking up something, though. 😉 😆 I also loved the part where Abhijeet sir stops him from speaking those last few words in the final scene. The ending would've been a little more complete if all others had wished him too, but it was very good nevertheless.

Looking forward to many more great stories from you. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: DemonStar

Apologies for being late; just finished reading it. This was a lovely story, Reshma. 👏 😃 Your writing style is engaging and very comfortable to follow. All the duo interaction was shown very well; my favourite has to be that chocolate scene. Daya sir's attitude there brought a smile to my face. 😆 I do feel Abhijeet sir knows him well enough now to be certain that he won't forget his birthday and is cooking up something, though. 😉 😆 I also loved the part where Abhijeet sir stops him from speaking those last few words in the final scene. The ending would've been a little more complete if all others had wished him too, but it was very good nevertheless.

Looking forward to many more great stories from you. 👍🏼

lovely story raaz 👏

Originally posted by: pappais

lovely story raaz 👏

loved all the scenes and also Dayas attitude

the surprise for abhijeet was really good

I was so saddened by an incident and wrote this poem... Felt like sharing it with you people... Edited by Raaz_sweet - 10 years ago

Oh.. Secret dear... that's really nice..
I know what are you going through..
i too had gone through all tthis when we just want to write what we feel.. and the words just pour out from our brain...

Stay strong my dear..😊
Greatly written..

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Really nice poem reshma,i appreciate your creativity.

Very nice poem raaz. ⭐️ 👏
great 😊

Lovely poem, Reshma. 👏 👍🏼 The last paragraph is particularly well-expressed. The dark side of life is sadly something that cannot be permanently kept at bay, but valour lies in standing our ground when it strikes.