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Mansi

@icehammer92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesomee! I like to read stories tt are close to the current storyline! And i love your character sketch! Do continue! 😉

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priya

@lovelypriya

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

😳osam n fab plz do continue i would love to read it n thanks 4 the sketch so plz do continue,,,,,😊

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Interesting story, great job plz continue soon

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Tia3303

@Tia3303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice :)
Plz pm me when you start

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rajashree

@raj-guria-kriti

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

heyyy its rlyyy nice...continue soon...👍🏼😉

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sreelu094

@sreelu094

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

sounds interesting.do continue

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iluvrainaarti

@iluvrainaarti

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

chapter 1.

Story starts from when Shivam tells Taani that what happened to weaklings at footloose was wrong.

Shivam: Taani I feel very bad for your brother and his team. Itni mehnat ki par uss ka koi faida hi nahin hua. Voh toh disqualify hogaye.
Taani: Han par iss main koi kar bhi kya saaktha hai.
Shivam: Taani joh bhi ho Sharon aur Dazzlers be sahi nahin kiya Swayam aur Weaklings ke saath. It was not right.
                                   Taani is seen lost in thought.

Scene change
Taani and Swayam are at home.
Taani: Bhai, ek bast poochun?
Swayam: Yeh koi poochni ki baat hai? Kya baat hai?
Taani: Bhai aap sab Shivam se nafrat kyun karthe hai? Saach saach
           bolna Bhai.
Swayam: Taani Shivam ek acha ladka nahin hai. Usne Sharon ka use
                kiya kyunki uss ko Dazzlers ka routine churana tha footloose
                competition ke liye aur jab hum ko pata chala humne uss ko
                aur uss ke college ko expose kiya. Dekh Taani mujhe teri life
                mein interfere karne mein koi haq nahin hai par please jab
                bhi uss ke saath ho to please be careful.
Taani: teek hai Bhai. Ab bhai raat bohat hogayi hai ab aap so jaye. Aur
           aap fikar maat kijiye sab teek hogaye ga.
Swayam: paatha nahin kab teek hoga sab. Pata nahin kyun jab bhi
                kuch teek hone lagtha hai to kuch na kuch ghalat ho jaa tha
                hai.
Taani: ab sab teek hogaye ga aur iss baar kuch galat nahin hoga. Ab
           aap tension free ho kar aaram kijiye. Goodnight Bhai.
Swayam: goodnight Taani.

Scene change to Taani's room.

Taani is thinking about what Swayam said and what Shivam had said earlier at college.

Taani in mind: toh iss ka matlab Shivam mujhe use karne ki koshish
                        rahaen hai taaki mere zaariye voh dono teams ko judaa
                        karde phir voh dono teams ko ruin karega. Itni gaandi
                        sooch kaise ho saakthi hai. Ab thak ussne jo bhi kiya
                        so ki ab aur nahi. Main yeh hone nahin doongi.

So tell me what you all think. Should I continue or not.

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow,i loved it👏

now Taani is realizing what Shivam is trying to do😆

plzz continue soon😳

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marina

@Loveurlife1

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

it was really good

awesome 😊

cant wait for the next chapter

Edited by loveurlife - 11 years ago

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Man!sha

@_LostSoul_

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Loved it yaar...👏

Plz continue...

Waiting😍

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