OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp) - Page 4

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incandescent

@incandescent

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Wow !!

Beautifully written...loved both parts !!

Now I really wish it happens the same way in the show !!

Edited by incandescent - 11 years ago

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Farah

@farah53

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That's SO fundamentally ASR-ish to instruct her to 'breathe' after robbing her of the same😉

Nice work👏

Edit:

Loved how Arnav declared he's not only his father's,but also his mother's son👍🏼

'you get your rasams,I get my SR'🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

truly lovely👏

Edited by farah53 - 11 years ago

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1DAlice

@1DAlice

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Awesome OS!!

Loved it!!😊

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Hiii
Awesome os
Loving it
ArHi sooo cute
Arnav sooo sweet
H8 dadi
ArHi marriage
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Plz do pm me
Thanks

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henamani

@henamani

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

loved both the parts but alas as per the new promo she will be wearing a boring suit

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Loved it!
It was nice and sweet.
Beautifully written😊

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arushi05

@arushi05

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Wow awesome os. Loved both the parts very much.

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683952

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

What a wonderful and beautifully written story.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I just loved both parts.

I've been waiting to read anything new from you Smitar and you delivered as always.

It's such a pleasure to read your work.

Thanks for the story.😃

Edited by zafi - 11 years ago

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arshi2gethr

@arshi2gethr

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

It's vry nyc...loved both d parts...😊😛 Edited by manishagoyal - 11 years ago

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Mind blowing this one was

I loved the way Arnav handled the whole situation :)

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