OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp) - Page 3

You are so good dude! I LOVE the way you werite so simply, yet so intensely! Me and my friend were just discussing how sweet and real and yet romantic you are in ALL your OSs! Plz keep writing more :D

i missed my first page

Very very nice, liked it very much

🤣 wat a slap to daadi !!
sooo cute !!
i wish it happened in d show...*sigh*

omg, dadi's plans back fired!!...*doing a happy dance *...couldn't be more happier!!..this is awesome stuff!!...i just mentioned in gayathri's post, that you two are one hell of a mother-daughter combo!!...such amazing writers in the same family!!...totally envy your skills...just kidding!!...anyways fabulous job as always dear...so glad you penned something based on the new promo...

this is really awesome os...

Dadi got an apt response...my heart is doing a dhinka chika...

Amazing, as always, Smita! I love the OS. 😉

Wow... this was just so awesome... i could picture it as though watching an episode of it... was tooo good... plzz update soon part 3 and plzz pm me... plzzz

Loved it...the cat and mouse game arnav is playing with Khushi was a delight to read...the poor girl is out of her Mind with fear and nervousness...he is such a Rakshas but Khushi's own adorable Rakshas.